First off, I want to tell you that I've been reading your stuff for weeks now and I love it all!
I know couples who have a thing about seeing one another on the night of the right before the wedding. It's never made sense to me now and this story doesn't really make me understand it any more. So pre-wedding nights are to be spend with children running around nude? And wishing that you coul have sex because one night without it is oh so hard?
Neil's idea of dependence on sex is...frightening. On his Yahoo group, he said that one of the main conflicts with Harry being married to Hermione and Luna was how Hermione would handle going without sex every so often while Harry slept with Luna. As doodasnapefreak put it, the entire scenario was obviously winding up for a threesome.
Ditto. Of course Neil would sink his meat claws into poor Luna, though. She's a girl who is able to be functional and successful and happy without clinging to a man, is not defined by romance, and doesn't devote herself to being eye candy. In his sick head, of course he must "correct" that. -_-
Of course, girls can't have interests beyond their twu wuv in this fic.
I almost think Luna is more OOC than Hermione here. It's definitely close. Maybe Snape and Draco beat her out on the OOC-o-meter for this fic (well, at least Snape).
I think the author has just heard that it's something people do and made zero effort to understand why. And zero effort to get into Harry's and/or Hermione's POV at all: no change there then.
Don't forget the fact that Harry and Hermione's relationship in this fanfic series makes the Bella/Edward relationship from Twilight look like Elizabeth Bennett and Fitzwilliam Darcy from Pride and Prejudice!
I know couples who have a thing about seeing one another on the night of the right before the wedding. It's never made sense to me now and this story doesn't really make me understand it any more. So pre-wedding nights are to be spend with children running around nude? And wishing that you coul have sex because one night without it is oh so hard?
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I almost think Luna is more OOC than Hermione here. It's definitely close. Maybe Snape and Draco beat her out on the OOC-o-meter for this fic (well, at least Snape).
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I think the author has just heard that it's something people do and made zero effort to understand why. And zero effort to get into Harry's and/or Hermione's POV at all: no change there then.
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