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Hogwarts Exposed Chapter 16 part 3

Jun 22, 2011 01:48

Yes, you will go to the ball. More's the pity.

( The chapter concludes... )

show don't tell, close harmony conversation, badfic:hogwarts exposed, knickers, did not do the bloody research, expospeak, draco trilogy wants him back, i can has characterisation, anvil of foreshadowing, reading the books is a good idea, sexism, insulin needed, americanisms in the potterverse, mary sue and gary stu, the sues are breeding, damning with faint praise, how is babby formed, hermione in name only, worst dating advice ever, harry potter, convention of the psychics, the only way is down, continuity isn't optional

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sickbritkid2 June 24 2011, 16:14:26 UTC

I think it's official: Szaleniec has been committed due to the insanity this fic has brought about. It's the only explanation for why he hasn't updated in three days!

szaleniec1000 June 24 2011, 16:41:13 UTC

I thought I'd take a bit of a breather before tackling the fail that is Chapter 17. Actually working on it right now, as it happens - hoping to post at least the first part this evening.

sickbritkid2 June 24 2011, 16:46:12 UTC

Excellent. Did you read my fanfic for your breather or something?

P. S. Have you watched How to Train Your Dragon? They're running it on HBO right now...

szaleniec1000 June 24 2011, 23:56:39 UTC

It looks good so far. Any particular things you'd like me to examine, or just a general overview? :)

For all HBO shows are popular here, the channel itself hasn't made its way over yet. I'm sure it'll be on sometime somewhere though. Thanks again for the recommendation!

sickbritkid2 June 25 2011, 05:40:06 UTC

I'd just like for you to leave up individual chapter reviews, one for each chapter, or something...

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