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Fic: Yen, 7/12

Mar 10, 2008 04:37

Yen

By kalimyre

Pairing: Kensei/Hiro, Adam/Hiro

Rating: Adult

Summary: In which the fairy tale does have a happy ending, but not the one you were expecting.

Notes: As always, thank you to my fabulous betas: powered_otaku and soulpeddler.

Chapter One
Chapter Two
Chapter Three
Chapter Four
Chapter Five
Chapter Six

( Chapter Seven )

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Comments 11

feyuca March 11 2008, 03:56:50 UTC

<3! Indeed, this is incredibly cute. :D I'm so glad you updated, hehe.

Things are getting interesting, and Adam is changing, a bit. I can't wait to see what happens...probably something bad, since this chapter is so fluffy (preparing us for the angst, probably?).

Thank you for the Adam/Hiro! Please continue soon. :)

kalimyre March 11 2008, 16:22:11 UTC

Yay for cute, thank you! And there are a few harder bits, but really, this is a happy story. That's just how I roll. *g*

tju_tju_tju_tju March 11 2008, 04:13:09 UTC

Dude, this is just the most awesome thing ever. Just AWESOME. I just want to gush and gush about it but I'll spare you. *g* But this is just amazing, really tightly plotted, interesting, very IC, and altogether just awesome.

(and I could totally picture Ando's expression when he saw them. XD Good stuff.)

kalimyre March 11 2008, 16:23:21 UTC

Thank you! (And feel free to gush anytime.) Thanks especially for liking the plot, as I'm terrible about actually planning these longer stories; they just sort of happen on their own.

Also, flustered Ando is made of adorable and I could not resist him. *pets*

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kalimyre March 11 2008, 16:25:47 UTC

Thanks so much! The bit with Ando and Adam was a lot of fun, because they have this whole rivalry thing going on, both of them vying for Hiro in their own ways. I can just imagine Ando as Hiro's keeper, bringing him food and generally looking after him from time to time.

Also, what is this On Hiro Getting Shot story you speak of? I thought I'd read all the Hiro fic out there, but I don't know that one. Link, pretty plz?

Tactless and adorable and honest as he is. <3

OMG yes, so Hiro. ♥

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kalimyre March 12 2008, 00:18:42 UTC

OMG, awwwwwww! That fic, made of so much squee. With Hiro all whumped and Nathan all big-brother worried and waffles and Ando and talking with their hands. Yes.

So, you know, thank you for linking. *g*

guanin March 11 2008, 17:00:15 UTC

This is so amazing. My favorite part is definitely the conversation between Ando and Adam. I just love Ando so. His total shock and nervousness at realizing that Hiro and Adam were lovers is so perfect. And Adam doesn't make it any easier for him, does he?

Just be a careful hero next time, all right?”

I love that line. It shows so nicely how worried Adam is about Hiro's sometimes mad need to be the hero and save the world. But he's such an adorable hero *hugs him*

Really beautiful work. I'm interested to see where this is going.

kalimyre March 11 2008, 17:11:34 UTC

Hee! Thanks so much, and of course, I couldn't resist a scene with all three of them. And yes, of course, Adam had to be a little smug about it. There's a certain rivalry there, the old friend and the new flame, and Adam is just insecure enough to play it up.

But he's such an adorable hero *hugs him*

Yes, he totally is. *g*

aunt_zelda March 22 2008, 20:57:31 UTC

*SQUEE ( ... )

kalimyre March 23 2008, 01:02:39 UTC

Yay!

This chapter was so WONDERFUL and Ando was PERFECT and ... KENSEI APPROVAL all over again!

Hee, thank you! And I love Ando. Couldn't have a Hiro story without Ando, come on. *g*

If only Maya had STAYED dead on the show ...

Dude, I know. Not sure why, but her and her brother just totally annoyed me.

He has your PHONE NUMBER MEMORIZED, Mohinder! You and he have had phonesex like three times on the show!

*snerk* Hmm... *pictures the phonesex* Uh-huh.

Maybe ... there are a bunch of depressing fics like that ...

Nah, this isn't a depressing fic. I don't think it is, anyway.

Hiro/Ando is so cute and canon it's just ... to easy to write.

I know! They were totally my first pairing, and then season two came along and there was Kensei looking so damn edible and obviously having a big old crush on Hiro, and I got a new pairing. *g*

OMG SQUEE! *huggles you*I can't resist the fluff! I don't know, I just have to have cuddling and lovey bits and big squishy awwww moments. It's like an addiction. ^_^ Thanks as always ( ... )

aunt_zelda March 24 2008, 14:21:54 UTC

Hee, thank you! And I love Ando. Couldn't have a Hiro story without Ando, come on. *g ( ... )