Fic: Yen, 7/12

Mar 10, 2008 04:37

Yen

By kalimyre

Pairing: Kensei/Hiro, Adam/Hiro

Rating: Adult

Summary: In which the fairy tale does have a happy ending, but not the one you were expecting.

Notes: As always, thank you to my fabulous betas: powered_otaku and soulpeddler.

Chapter One
Chapter Two
Chapter Three
Chapter Four
Chapter Five
Chapter Six

Chapter Seven )

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aunt_zelda March 22 2008, 20:57:31 UTC
*SQUEE*
This chapter was so WONDERFUL and Ando was PERFECT and ... KENSEI APPROVAL all over again!

Suresh was busy kicking himself over actually giving Sylar the cure, instead of some random chemical in a syringe.
Oh Mohindy, just drop the 'I hate him' act already. We KNOW you're in lurve with him!

“Who’s Matt?” Adam asked.
“He’s...” Suresh shook his head. “We’re taking care of Molly together.
Oooooo! Canon!

“Bob will take care of that,” Nikki said, not indicating if she meant the dead body, or calling Matt. Possibly both. Hiro thought Bob was the sort of man who could make inconvenient dead bodies go away.
If only Maya had STAYED dead on the show ...

“Don’t try to lay blame,” Suresh said. “Nobody made Sylar a killer; he did that on his own.”
*cough* No, it's Papa Suresh's fault *cough*

“Sylar knows where I live,” Suresh realized
He has your PHONE NUMBER MEMORIZED, Mohinder! You and he have had phonesex like three times on the show!

Suresh didn’t look pleased, but he nodded, pulling Molly close to his side. On his other side, Elle leaned in, tucked a bit of his hair behind his ear, and said, “Guess we get to be roomies.”
*sporfles* (Touch him again, Elle and Sylar will kill you VERY slowly!)

“You died!” Adam insisted, punching him lightly on the shoulder. “Listen to me! The... the whole dying thing, not acceptable!”
*BEAMS*

From what I could gather today, Sylar has run across a lot of paths. Maybe Suresh is meant to kill him.
Maybe ... there are a bunch of depressing fics like that ...

Adam shook his head. “You can’t help who you are. Just be a careful hero next time, all right?”
Hurrah for anti-heroes! *huggles them all*

Well. At least the question of how he was going to tell Ando about Adam had been answered. Now he just had to figure out how to explain the rest of his impossible story.
Adam, smirking, came up behind him and slipped a possessive arm around his waist, raising one suggestive eyebrow at Ando. Ando’s eyes, if it were possible, got a little wider.
Yeah. Clearly Adam was going to be a big help.
*sporfles*

It took Adam a moment to realize the man was assuring him he wasn’t a rival for Hiro’s affections, which... he really wasn’t sure how to react to. Good? Presumptuous? Ridiculous to even think he’d be competition? But nice of him to confirm that he wasn’t?
Hiro/Ando is so cute and canon it's just ... to easy to write.

Ando stared at the spatter on Hiro’s shirt. “How is being shot okay?”
“Good question,” Adam added, giving Hiro a pointed look. He didn’t plan to get over that anytime soon.
*sporfles*

Ando grinned, his face suddenly lighting up. “That’s what I came to tell you! Well, partly. I got a promotion! He gave me an office and now, our old boss? He’s working for me.”
How's Kimiko feel about this? *grinz*

If Hiro had fallen for the princess, instead of him. He could even picture it: him coming back from some battle, exhausted and hot in his heavy armor, to find Hiro and Yaeko beneath the cherry blossoms, stealing a kiss.
The image cut an unexpected shaft of pain into his guts and he shook it off, frowning. Hiro would never.
Glad to see SOMEONE'S thinking sensibly about that whole fiasco!

“I loved the idea of the princess. The idea of the perfect fairytale love story. But the real Yaeko? I felt sorry for her, because she didn’t get to have you.”
*SQUEE*

And he wanted to say something, he wanted to have the right words and didn’t. He could tell Hiro that if he lived another hundred years, he’d never find anyone else like him. He could say Hiro made him feel worthwhile, made him feel both happy and like he deserved happiness. He could say that the idea of living forever terrified him, because Hiro wouldn’t.
But none of that was enough, and it would never sound right when spoken out loud, so he took Hiro into the bedroom, and showed him instead.
OMG SQUEE! *huggles you*

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kalimyre March 23 2008, 01:02:39 UTC
Yay!

This chapter was so WONDERFUL and Ando was PERFECT and ... KENSEI APPROVAL all over again!

Hee, thank you! And I love Ando. Couldn't have a Hiro story without Ando, come on. *g*

If only Maya had STAYED dead on the show ...

Dude, I know. Not sure why, but her and her brother just totally annoyed me.

He has your PHONE NUMBER MEMORIZED, Mohinder! You and he have had phonesex like three times on the show!

*snerk* Hmm... *pictures the phonesex* Uh-huh.

Maybe ... there are a bunch of depressing fics like that ...

Nah, this isn't a depressing fic. I don't think it is, anyway.

Hiro/Ando is so cute and canon it's just ... to easy to write.

I know! They were totally my first pairing, and then season two came along and there was Kensei looking so damn edible and obviously having a big old crush on Hiro, and I got a new pairing. *g*

OMG SQUEE! *huggles you*

I can't resist the fluff! I don't know, I just have to have cuddling and lovey bits and big squishy awwww moments. It's like an addiction. ^_^ Thanks as always for the awesome feedback, you rock!

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aunt_zelda March 24 2008, 14:21:54 UTC
Hee, thank you! And I love Ando. Couldn't have a Hiro story without Ando, come on. *g*
So true!

Dude, I know. Not sure why, but her and her brother just totally annoyed me.
*headdesk* At least she made the Mylar more canon ... a feat I didn't think possible unless Sylar started making Mohinder sleep with him to keep Molly alive ...

*snerk* Hmm... *pictures the phonesex* Uh-huh.
They do! Sylar MEMORIZED MOHINDER'S PHONE NUMBER! And Mohinder recognizes the voice of that 'dead' man when he says ONE WORD! No one says 'Mohinder' like Sylar does!

I know! They were totally my first pairing, and then season two came along and there was Kensei looking so damn edible and obviously having a big old crush on Hiro, and I got a new pairing. *g*
It makes me happy inside. Life is good, for a slasher.

I can't resist the fluff! I don't know, I just have to have cuddling and lovey bits and big squishy awwww moments. It's like an addiction. ^_^
A good addiction! I write angst/crack ... a very strange genre indeed ... like 'Thanksgiving' and 'Christmas' ...

Thanks as always for the awesome feedback, you rock!
Awwww, *SQUEE*

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