The Odds

[swoon21]

Title: The Odds
Pairings: Shige/Tegoshi
Rating: NC-17
A/N: This is a sequel to my earlier work, Wants and Needs.

Comments

[yuyayuko]

Ok where to begin, I pretty much have spammed you on dm. so first of all thank you for writing this ive been in desperate need of reading new tegoshiges fic lol you know this very well tbh. What to say? Oh gosh I just love this so much. Your writing never failed to amaze me. It sounds like im exaggerating things bc this is a tegoshige fic so thats why I think this is good but believe me im not. The talks here, their conversations, they’re like really deep, that part for example when they talk whether their relationship would last or not, about shige telling tegoshi that he should always be honest, tegoshi elaborating things about people being so vulnerable when they’re attached to others, the odds of them meeting.. this list would be endless tbh.

And oh of course all the sex scenes here. all I felt was pain, they were too much I wish I was the bed lmfao im like rereading right now. how did you write this? I have to admit my fave is where they watched that French movie together I told you this already but hell I can clearly picture tegoshi sitting on shiges lap like tegoshi wuld be like I don’t know this shit baby youre beautiful. This ripped me to pieces I need a moment! Im dead and fucking gone like take me to highest beyond and leave me there to die jhfaskdjaksdjas. tbh im literally that headboard tegoshis holding on to while shige giving it to him. Ok I seriously need to chill out from this a bit I feel like commenting on every single sentence. It was amazing, tho it was too much for me, this was just beautiful. I was like a sequel pls but then I remembered this is already a sequel.

All in all, thank you.

[swoon21]

Thank you for the detailed comment, dear. It means a lot.