[fic]The Blood Countess

Aug 18, 2009 20:21


Title: The Blood Countess

Author:sweetmagnae
Pairings: SuperJunior/Shinee

Chapter: 5/?

Rating:PG13

Summary: SuJu and Shinee are spending their vacation in the legendary “Castle Csejthe” which was ounce a finishing school for girls run by the blood-thirsty 17th century Countess Elizabeth Bathory,during their stay they learned the dark secrets behind the twisted witch and her horrifying history and realize they’re in for a spooky adventure.

Author’s note: its been a looooong time since I’ve been in LJ,sorry but I was really busy about skool n everything,this was inspired by that ghost story about this countess and just thought I’de try doing a horror series. If u want to avoid having nightmares I suggest not reading this and I hope u’ll enjoy this ^^

WARNING: Elizabeth Bathory and Castle Csejthe is a true story,which means it existed before so please respect the story and don’t think too much about it. You can find more information in Google

Chapter 5

The killing begins

The SHINee members were gathered at the kitchen the next morning making some breakfast. As Key was making his coffee Taemin leaned in and whispered in Chinese “hyung”.

Key looked back, surprised but replied in the same language “what?”

“I think Ryeowook hyung is up to something”

“what do you mean?”

“I mean look at how weird he has been acting, don’t you suspect anything?”

“well he has been a little off but I’m sure it’s just one of those unicorn dreams he’s been having”

“are you guys talking in Chinese?” Onew cut in, in Chinese.

“yeah we’re talking in Chinese” Key replied and was about to continue his conversation with Taemin when Onew cut in again.

“why are you talking in Chinese when we could just talk in Korean?” Key looked back, annoyed.

“just shut the hell up and talk in Chinese” Onew looked awkward but nodded plainly.

“so, what are you guys talking about?” Taemin leaned whispered to Onew.

“we’re talking about Ryeowook hyung, he’s been acting weird lately, have you noticed hyung?”

Onew nodded “yeah I’ve notice, but I’m sure it’s the unicorn dreams that’s bugging him” Taemin sighed “why does everyone say it’s the unicorn dreams? What the heck is a unicorn dream anyway?”

“Taemin, don’t say heck” Key scolded

“you can say it”

“because I’m old enough”

“oh, so you finally admit that your old” Onew joked

“I don’t mean it that way you jerk” Key glared at Onew

“hey, you guys are talking in Chinese” Jonghyun announced, in Chinese

“really? Is there something going on? Why Chinese?” Minho joined, also in Chinese

Key glared at them “I don’t know why we’re talking in Chinese, we just started in Chinese so if you want to be part of the damn conversation just talk in Chinese”

“well what’s going then?” Minho asked

“what do you mean?”

“well if we’re talking in Chinese it’s obvious something’s going on so what is it?”

“nothing is going on, is it wrong to just to speak in Chinese?”

“well how am I supposed to know? every time something happens we always speak in Chinese”

“uh...hyung? remind me why we are speaking in Chinese again?” Taemin asked

“why are you guys speaking in Chinese?” Shindong came into the kitchen

“WHY IS EVERYONE SO CONCERNED ABOUT US TALKING IN CHINESE?!” Key exploded, finally in Korean.

Everyone stared. What’s wrong with him?

Shindong look awkward, “okay okay, calm down I was just asking…” his voice trailed off at the sight of chocolate pudding in the fridge. Sungmin did mention a surprise for him in the fridge, was it the chocolate pudding he meant? Whatever, he’s eating it anyway. Key stared at Shindong in disgust, then he turned back to his fellow members.

“okay…where were we? Ah shit now I can’t remember just because of you guys!!”

“me? Why does it always have to be me? Why can’t it be you?”

“YOU DARE TALK BACK AT ME??!”

“why do I hear fighting on a beautiful day like this?”

Every turned to look at the second Super Junior member to walk into the kitchen, though Heechul wasn’t here to look for food, instead he came to see what was all the racket going on in the kitchen that had disturbed his beauty sleep, but he kept the feelings inside. For now.

Taemin lighted up at the sight of the beauty king, “good morning hyung, what are you doing up so early? I though you wouldn’t be up till 10:00 am?”

“well, I just thought a slight change wouldn’t hurt” Heechul said through gritted teeth, which, Onew saw wasn’t a good sign.

“oh,okay…hyung? Have you noticed anything strange in Ryeowook hyung’s behaviour?”

Heechul thought for a moment “hmm…yeah I have noticed him acting weird lately”

“like last night when he just suddenly dismiss himself from group meeting?” Minho asked.

“yeah, like that! He seems to be act as though he knows this Elizabeth chick,whatever her name is?” Taemin pointed out,innocent eyes

“oh ma gah~Taeminnie you are so cute like making a face like that~” Heechul went over started squeezing Taemin’s cheek, to Minho’s dismay

“ngh~yung zop zweezing ma sheeks~~”

“but your so cute~”

“stop squeezing his cheeks hyung”

Everyone looked at Minho, “ooh” they went. Heechul simply smirked, “didn’t know you could be jealous” and released Taemin’s cheeks at ounce, he mouthed a ‘thank you’ to Minho. Minho winked. Taemin blushed. What’s with these lovers?

“ ugh this is so pathetic to watch, I think im just going to take a walk outside in the grounds” Key said in disgust and walked out o the kitchen after sending a glare at Jonghyun who said “ be careful of Ryeowook hyung then! Who knows he could kill you with a sound of his voice? Haha..” “ fyu know fwat, I fink I fill fake a fwalk foo”  Shindong before walking out of the kitchen as well, chewing the chocolate pudding happily in his mouth.

Zhoumi doesn’t really remember how long he has been sitting on his bed. He was so worried and scared that he really had no strength to do anything at all. ‘ we need to get out of here’ he thought. He had the feeling that the others didn’t really believe their story in the torture dungeons. ‘but we have evidence, there were 7 of us down there, that’s enough people to convince the others ’ Zhoumi shook his head. Whether the others will like or not, he is going to find a way out of here. And fast.

Shindong was so busy eating his delicious chocolate pudding that he was not aware he had wondered to most deserted part of the castle. It was the tower where Elizabeth was originally buried alive. Though Shindong , busy with his snack, didn’t notice that until he had climb to the top of the tower and into Elizabeth’s bedroom. “ woah… this is one nasty place!” Shindong went to over the dusty table and closet, filled with large cobwebs. Shindong was looking at the ancient closet with wonder when something caught his eye. He went to the bed, it had thin sheets that you could look through as it’s hangings, and behind it lying on the bed, was a body .

Shindong hesitated before drawing back the hangings, there on the bed was a body of a very attractive woman, probably in her 40s. no doubt this is the body of Countess Elizabeth Bathory. Shindong was so shocked that he didn’t here the door behind creaked open. And before he could turn around, there was a sound of a knife slashing flesh. Blood was splattered all over the room and Shindong fell to the floor. His throat cut so deep that the blood flowed out endlessly. The last remaining piece of chocolate pudding still clutched by his hand

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finally!!chpt 5 is done!! i am so sorry ppl for being absent for FIVE WHOLE MONTHS!!!! i went back to the Philippines for two weeks and when i came back here, i had to catch up with the work i missed from skool, plus there was a prob with my net so i couldn't in the internet for two days,,i hope no one forgot this fanfic,,i miss LJ!!!!its feels great to be back!!!! =)

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