Dec 08, 2010 19:22
Going through the old, saved stories I carry on my flashdrive, I went reread Altered Paragon. I decided that, though very good, it needs some tune-ups. I might change the plot line up a bit too. (Probably a lot.) But Beta, Alpha, a hacker Nao, a dancer Shou, a 'gladiator' Pon, vigilante Tora and a psychotic Saga will still be involved. Ruki's role is probably the character I need to work on the most. Add some depth to him. I also need not to make somethings so painfully obvious.
Here's to some luck. ^_^
altered paragon,
fan fic,
alice nine,
oc