Alicia winced. "Oh." She glanced at the barback, but didn't see any physical marks. "He doesn't..."
"No." The tone was firm, and a small spark in the eyes Alicia couldn't help looking at made Alicia believe her.
"Okay." They reached the door to the bar, and the other woman pulled it open. She gestured for Alicia to go in first, and somehow it seemed so gentlemanly it broke Alicia's heart. She always got sentimental when drunk, too. Without thinking about it, she reached out and pulled the other woman into a hug. Startled, the door slipped from the barback's hand and slammed shut again. "Okay."
After a moment, Alicia realized she could feel how awkward the barback was feeling, and she released her. The look that greeted her was one of surprise, and a small thrill ran down Alicia's spine at finally being able to recognize something on that enigmatic face. "Thanks," Alicia blurted out again, not sure what she was thanking her for.
Before the other woman could move away, a flash of inspiration ran through Alicia. "Hold on!" she said excitedly, reaching into her purse and rummaging around. After a moment's panic, she found what she was looking for, and drew out a business card. Alicia had just picked up an internship for the summer at Crozier, Abrams and Abbott, and had gotten the cards from Will as a congratulations. She triumphantly presented it to the other woman.
After a moment's hesitation, it was accepted. "I'm not..." A pause. "Leaving. Him, I mean."
"Oh!" Alicia exclaimed. "No, no. I just wanted you to have it. If you want to get together or something. For drinks." She swayed. "Or something. It has my house phone on it, if I don't answer you can just leave a message on the machine or with one of my roommates."
This time the look she was given was one of amusement. "I work at a bar."
Alicia laughed, throwing her head back as the humor of her comment hit her. "I know that. I just..." She shrugged slightly. "I feel like you need a friend, and I kind of feel like I just volunteered." She smiled brightly. "I don't mind volunteering."
The woman seemed stunned as she stared at Alicia. "Okay," she said quietly, her dark eyes wide. "Sure."
Alicia's smile grew bigger. "Great!" She reached for the door, pulling it open.
"Don't you want to know my name?" the woman asked, her tone suddenly soft and warm and drawing Alicia in.
The door slipped from Alicia's hand, and shut them out in the fresh night air. "Yes," Alicia responded, her tone suddenly desperately earnest.
The barback gave her an ineffable smile. "You can call me Kalinda." A pause. "All my friends do."
Re: Stray PT 4mickaela82July 10 2012, 08:58:41 UTC
The beginning of "Kalinda". Absolutely amazing! And seeing Alicia babble and Kalinda being stunned, like..."who is this crazy person and why am I letting her get to me?" That's just...made of win!
Re: Stray PT 4hotladykissesJuly 10 2012, 16:01:04 UTC
OMG, this is awesome! It’s like witnessing Batman and Robin’s first meeting! ;-)
Seriously, I love the way Kalinda looks too young to drink (and to be married already), and the way Alicia still has a bit of her teenage awkwardness, and how both were bound to meet and rescue each other and be fascinated by one another on their first encounter! Thanks for writing this fic, I just know this is the beginning of a long and beautiful relationship! :-D
Oh my god, I love this. Of course Alicia's the girl people are always goading to drink. Of course her eye-rolls are famous. Of course she'd bound right into the middle of Leela's business like an overenthusiastic puppy. (And oh god, baby!Kalinda the barback killed me. KILLED ME.)
How're Alicia's eye-rolls ever NOT famous? I mean, have you seen those things? She does your average teenager proud, it's almost obnoxious it's so awesome. I'm glad you liked it, I had fun writing it!
That is a destined relationship if you can get past thrown up nachos as a first impression. ;)
This was great. Feel free to continue this. I really, really want newly christened Kalinda to throw a wrench in that engagement of one Ms. Cavanaugh. It's like going back in time to kill baby Hitler! lol
Man, I've had the idea for a follow-on bouncing in my head for a while, but every time I sit down to write it it comes out full of angst, and that's not what I want for a sequel. I'm working on it - if I can ever get it to work, I'll make sure and post it to the lj group page!
Re: Stray PT 4sweetjamieleeJuly 20 2012, 01:55:58 UTC
This is my favorite prompt I ever prompted, I swear. I've seen many different incarnations of Georgetown!Alicia and typically enjoy them, but the idea of baby Kalinda, and baby Alicia MEETING baby Kalinda, just... gah. THIS SHOULD HAVE HAPPENED.
I love how protective Alicia was right off the bat here -- blindly, maybe naively, but somehow seeming to like this stranger more than she likes her law student compatriots at the bar. And Kalinda's cautiousness, but inability to resist Alicia's drunken charms (puking aside!), feels right on. It really makes me want to know more... about Kalinda's mysterious marriage, but mostly about what comes next in this unlikely friendship. What are the chances of goading you into continuing??
I usually stay away from Georgetown!Alicia because it means Georgetown!Will, and while I like him I don't want him anywhere near my Kalicia ^.^
I saw your prompt, and I just knew instantly what would happen. It didn't seem at all likely that they would be at school together, in my head. And living in the DC metro area, I can tell you that the Georgetown set are whole different beasts from the rest of DC - I mean, they don't have a metro stop because they want to keep the "vagrants" away - although that's not so much the students as those who live there, the mindset is pervasive. So then the idea of a bar, and having Kalinda work there... it just fell into place.
I want to write a continuation, but each time I try it gets all angsty and I want them to have fun first. So I'll keep working on it, and if I ever hammer it into a shape I like I'll be sure and post it on the lj group.
"No." The tone was firm, and a small spark in the eyes Alicia couldn't help looking at made Alicia believe her.
"Okay." They reached the door to the bar, and the other woman pulled it open. She gestured for Alicia to go in first, and somehow it seemed so gentlemanly it broke Alicia's heart. She always got sentimental when drunk, too. Without thinking about it, she reached out and pulled the other woman into a hug. Startled, the door slipped from the barback's hand and slammed shut again. "Okay."
After a moment, Alicia realized she could feel how awkward the barback was feeling, and she released her. The look that greeted her was one of surprise, and a small thrill ran down Alicia's spine at finally being able to recognize something on that enigmatic face. "Thanks," Alicia blurted out again, not sure what she was thanking her for.
Before the other woman could move away, a flash of inspiration ran through Alicia. "Hold on!" she said excitedly, reaching into her purse and rummaging around. After a moment's panic, she found what she was looking for, and drew out a business card. Alicia had just picked up an internship for the summer at Crozier, Abrams and Abbott, and had gotten the cards from Will as a congratulations. She triumphantly presented it to the other woman.
After a moment's hesitation, it was accepted. "I'm not..." A pause. "Leaving. Him, I mean."
"Oh!" Alicia exclaimed. "No, no. I just wanted you to have it. If you want to get together or something. For drinks." She swayed. "Or something. It has my house phone on it, if I don't answer you can just leave a message on the machine or with one of my roommates."
This time the look she was given was one of amusement. "I work at a bar."
Alicia laughed, throwing her head back as the humor of her comment hit her. "I know that. I just..." She shrugged slightly. "I feel like you need a friend, and I kind of feel like I just volunteered." She smiled brightly. "I don't mind volunteering."
The woman seemed stunned as she stared at Alicia. "Okay," she said quietly, her dark eyes wide. "Sure."
Alicia's smile grew bigger. "Great!" She reached for the door, pulling it open.
"Don't you want to know my name?" the woman asked, her tone suddenly soft and warm and drawing Alicia in.
The door slipped from Alicia's hand, and shut them out in the fresh night air. "Yes," Alicia responded, her tone suddenly desperately earnest.
The barback gave her an ineffable smile. "You can call me Kalinda." A pause. "All my friends do."
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Seriously, I love the way Kalinda looks too young to drink (and to be married already), and the way Alicia still has a bit of her teenage awkwardness, and how both were bound to meet and rescue each other and be fascinated by one another on their first encounter! Thanks for writing this fic, I just know this is the beginning of a long and beautiful relationship! :-D
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I'm glad you liked it - I had fun writing it!
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That is a destined relationship if you can get past thrown up nachos as a first impression. ;)
This was great. Feel free to continue this. I really, really want newly christened Kalinda to throw a wrench in that engagement of one Ms. Cavanaugh. It's like going back in time to kill baby Hitler! lol
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I love how protective Alicia was right off the bat here -- blindly, maybe naively, but somehow seeming to like this stranger more than she likes her law student compatriots at the bar. And Kalinda's cautiousness, but inability to resist Alicia's drunken charms (puking aside!), feels right on. It really makes me want to know more... about Kalinda's mysterious marriage, but mostly about what comes next in this unlikely friendship. What are the chances of goading you into continuing??
In any case, SO enjoyed this. Thank you for it!
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I saw your prompt, and I just knew instantly what would happen. It didn't seem at all likely that they would be at school together, in my head. And living in the DC metro area, I can tell you that the Georgetown set are whole different beasts from the rest of DC - I mean, they don't have a metro stop because they want to keep the "vagrants" away - although that's not so much the students as those who live there, the mindset is pervasive. So then the idea of a bar, and having Kalinda work there... it just fell into place.
I want to write a continuation, but each time I try it gets all angsty and I want them to have fun first. So I'll keep working on it, and if I ever hammer it into a shape I like I'll be sure and post it on the lj group.
So glad you liked it!
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