"It's a Lockhart-Gardner Tradition" 2012 Summer Ficathon

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Stray PT 1 frequencyshift July 10 2012, 03:17:51 UTC
I was going to pass this prompt by, and then I got hit in the middle of the forehead with an idea. I don't think it's quite what you wanted, but I hope you enjoy anyway!

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The bar was packed, the entire Appellate Litigation class having poured in after a long, grueling day of moot court. Three deep at the counter, shots were being passed liberally, and Alicia wondered idly why she had even bothered to take cash out at the ATM after downing her third free one. She gasped slightly at the whiskey burn, but powered through as the others laughed at her face.

“Oh, Cavanaugh, you're so prim and proper all the time,” Tracy gushed, slinging one arm over Alicia's bony shoulders. “Let loose, take some shots with us!”

“I thought I was,” Alicia replied with a wry smile, a twinge of irritation shooting through her. She knew she was the good girl, but she'd grown up amongst functional alcoholics. Just because it made her jaw ache didn't mean she couldn't drink them all under the table.

“Yeah, but, I mean, have more!” the other woman burbled, causing their group to burst out laughing. “Let your hair down!”

She rolled her eyes, a move some of the others mimicked immediately. Her eye rolls were a bit famous. “Fine,” she said, picking up another shot without bothering to see what it was. She quickly downed it, wincing internally as she discovered it was tequila. Mixing alcohol was going to hurt later.

The other cheered, and after putting the empty shot glass back on the table she looked up to see Peter. He was standing by the bar, chatting with a classmate whose name she'd never actually learned. Peter saw her looking, and smiled.

Immediately, she felt the blush on her cheeks, and looked down to stare at her hands. More specifically, the ring that graced her left. He'd popped the question the previous weekend, and she'd accepted once she could make herself understood behind all the tears. Peter was everything she could ever want (Will had even agreed, through a slightly tensed jaw and tight eyes) and he made her laugh. She loved him more than any other guy she'd ever been with, and she was happy. Oh, it felt like she'd been waiting so long for that to happen - to be happy.

Another shot was pushed into her hand, dragging her away from contemplating the one-karat diamond on her finger. She looked up to see all the others raising their shot glasses in her direction. “What? Oh, a toast? What are we toasting?”

Benjamin, a wispy man with the saddest attempt at a mustache gracing his upper lip, winked at her. “To your impending nuptials, though they be postponed to after graduation. Congratulations!”

Blushing an even deeper red, she sputtered her thanks before downing her shot. And another.

And another.

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Stray PT 2 frequencyshift July 10 2012, 03:20:00 UTC
The door closing behind her cut off the roar of the bar, emphasizing to her admittedly drunk ears how absolutely chaotic the evening had gotten. Alicia staggered as she walked to a light pole, grabbing it in order to keep her feet. She was beyond drunk, and dangerously close to getting sick. The air inside had gotten thick with heat and the smell of spilt alcohol and sweat, and she'd suddenly felt the overwhelming need to breath in fresh air. She'd managed to avoid anyone spotting her as she slipped out. A moment of peace and quiet was all she wanted.

A crash from the alleyway interrupted that thought, the sound of breaking glass cutting through the drunken haze Alicia found herself in. She would have ignored it, since she assumed it was someone throwing out garbage, but the sound of heated voices grabbed her attention. She still probably wouldn't have done anything, but then she started to actually listen. While the words weren't clear enough for her to understand what they were saying, she could hear that it was a man and a woman. And the man sounded angry.

Pushing off of the light pole, she staggered towards the alley. In her head, she could practically hear herself screaming how bad of an idea this was, but the alcohol had lowered her inhibitions as it normally did. She always did stupid things when drunk.

She recognized the woman. She was Indian, or something to that effect, and tiny. She also worked at the bar, mostly busing and taking orders at the bar when it was too busy for the regular bartenders to handle alone. She looked like she wasn't even old enough to drink, let alone work there, and everyone pretty much left her alone. She put off a vibe that kept everyone at a distance. Alicia wondered idly how she had gotten the job in the first place.

The man, whoever he was, had his back to her. He towered over the barback, his shoulders hunched and fists clenched. "Goddammit, Leela, I swear I have had enough of this shit." He gestured wildly at her, and although she didn't move Alicia could see the flinch in her eyes. By the terrible light of the alley, she could see the flinch, and that propelled her forward.

"Hey, what's going on?" Alicia asked, although even she could tell the words were slightly slurred. It sounded almost pathetic.

The man turned, revealing a craggy face beneath blonde hair that scowled fiercely at her. "What do you want?"

Alicia swayed, and wished she wasn't wearing heels so high. "I want to know what's going on," she said slowly, enunciated as carefully as possible. Her eyes flicked between the two. Leela stared at her, an expression on her face too full of different emotions to be readable.

"It's none of your business," he growled, almost turning away from her. "Fuck off."

"No." Alicia surprised herself at the response, swaying again. She must have been so intimidating, she thought mockingly to herself, with her inability to stand straight and small frame. Alicia was just barely growing out of her super-thin, awkward teenage shape, half a decade after having left her teenage years. "I don't like you."

He laughed at that, a bark that ripped through the alley like a shot. "What the fuck?"

"I mean," she said slowly, "I don't like you here. In this alley. You're too angry, and I don't like it. I think you should leave."

The look on his face now was of disbelief. "Why would I do that?" he asked, now actually amused. He turned towards her, taking a step. He wasn't actually that much taller than Alicia, she noticed absently, although she was still wearing heels.

"Because lawyers." She blinked. "Lots of lawyers in the bar. I know them. All of them. Well, most of them. You don't piss off lawyers."

The man's eyes narrowed, and suddenly Alicia became just a bit afraid. There was no one in the alley but her, him, and the barback whose name she had already forgotten. He wasn't that much bigger than her, but she had only taken a self defense course once, back during freshman year of her undergraduate. She didn't think that would help her much.

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Stray PT 3 frequencyshift July 10 2012, 03:21:59 UTC
He took another step forward, and Alicia braced herself for something she didn't even know how to expect. A dark hand suddenly darted out, and the barback had reached out and grabbed his arm. He stopped moving, turning his head just barely enough to eye the other woman.

"Don't," she said in a quiet, no-nonsense tone. "We'll talk later."

He growled something at her, the words to soft for Alicia to actually overhear, and the other woman just nodded wearily. The man shrugged her hand away, and stalked towards Alicia. Past Alicia. She almost fell over as she turned to watch him leave, his hands shoved deep into jean pockets.

The sudden move caused her world to spin, and she suddenly realized the alcohol and adrenalin that was rushing through her system. It was too much, and she'd barely staggered to the side of the alley before her gut wrenched and she was throwing up all the drinks and bar nachos she had consumed earlier.

It took her a moment to realize there were cool hands on her, pulling Alicia's hair back. One gently rested between her shoulder blades, so light she kept forgetting it was there until the pressure would change.

Once her stomach finally decided she had nothing left to give, she turned her head to one side to view the woman beside her. "Thanks," Alicia croaked, staring into dark eyes that seemed so full of emotion and so closed off at the same time.

"Don't mention it," the woman responded, and there were dual meanings in her words that Alicia implicitly understood.

The barback helped Alicia stand up right again, steadying her as a heel caught on a stray piece of gravel. "Are you okay?" the woman asked quietly.

"Water," Alicia managed to get out. "Bed. Greasy food in the morning. I'll be fine."

The smallest trace of a smile graced the woman's dark features. "You have friends inside the bar? To take you home?"

Alicia nodded. "Fiancé." She slowly started walking towards the street, hoping Peter wouldn't be hard to find inside the bar. She wanted to go home. "Boyfriend?" she asked the other woman. She understood, but it had been Alicia instead of her brother Owen who had brought strays home as a kid, and there was no way she wasn't going to mention it.

For a moment Alicia thought she was going to be ignored, but then a small sigh escaped her companion. "Husband."

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Stray PT 4 frequencyshift July 10 2012, 03:23:09 UTC
Alicia winced. "Oh." She glanced at the barback, but didn't see any physical marks. "He doesn't..."

"No." The tone was firm, and a small spark in the eyes Alicia couldn't help looking at made Alicia believe her.

"Okay." They reached the door to the bar, and the other woman pulled it open. She gestured for Alicia to go in first, and somehow it seemed so gentlemanly it broke Alicia's heart. She always got sentimental when drunk, too. Without thinking about it, she reached out and pulled the other woman into a hug. Startled, the door slipped from the barback's hand and slammed shut again. "Okay."

After a moment, Alicia realized she could feel how awkward the barback was feeling, and she released her. The look that greeted her was one of surprise, and a small thrill ran down Alicia's spine at finally being able to recognize something on that enigmatic face. "Thanks," Alicia blurted out again, not sure what she was thanking her for.

Before the other woman could move away, a flash of inspiration ran through Alicia. "Hold on!" she said excitedly, reaching into her purse and rummaging around. After a moment's panic, she found what she was looking for, and drew out a business card. Alicia had just picked up an internship for the summer at Crozier, Abrams and Abbott, and had gotten the cards from Will as a congratulations. She triumphantly presented it to the other woman.

After a moment's hesitation, it was accepted. "I'm not..." A pause. "Leaving. Him, I mean."

"Oh!" Alicia exclaimed. "No, no. I just wanted you to have it. If you want to get together or something. For drinks." She swayed. "Or something. It has my house phone on it, if I don't answer you can just leave a message on the machine or with one of my roommates."

This time the look she was given was one of amusement. "I work at a bar."

Alicia laughed, throwing her head back as the humor of her comment hit her. "I know that. I just..." She shrugged slightly. "I feel like you need a friend, and I kind of feel like I just volunteered." She smiled brightly. "I don't mind volunteering."

The woman seemed stunned as she stared at Alicia. "Okay," she said quietly, her dark eyes wide. "Sure."

Alicia's smile grew bigger. "Great!" She reached for the door, pulling it open.

"Don't you want to know my name?" the woman asked, her tone suddenly soft and warm and drawing Alicia in.

The door slipped from Alicia's hand, and shut them out in the fresh night air. "Yes," Alicia responded, her tone suddenly desperately earnest.

The barback gave her an ineffable smile. "You can call me Kalinda." A pause. "All my friends do."

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Re: Stray PT 4 mickaela82 July 10 2012, 08:58:41 UTC
The beginning of "Kalinda". Absolutely amazing! And seeing Alicia babble and Kalinda being stunned, like..."who is this crazy person and why am I letting her get to me?" That's just...made of win!

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Re: Stray PT 4 frequencyshift July 28 2012, 07:51:44 UTC
Haha thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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Re: Stray PT 4 hotladykisses July 10 2012, 16:01:04 UTC
OMG, this is awesome! It’s like witnessing Batman and Robin’s first meeting! ;-)

Seriously, I love the way Kalinda looks too young to drink (and to be married already), and the way Alicia still has a bit of her teenage awkwardness, and how both were bound to meet and rescue each other and be fascinated by one another on their first encounter! Thanks for writing this fic, I just know this is the beginning of a long and beautiful relationship! :-D

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Re: Stray PT 4 frequencyshift July 28 2012, 07:52:50 UTC
It is rather like Batman and Robin meeting, although I hesitate to assume who would be who...

I'm glad you liked it - I had fun writing it!

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threeguesses July 11 2012, 00:28:43 UTC
Oh my god, I love this. Of course Alicia's the girl people are always goading to drink. Of course her eye-rolls are famous. Of course she'd bound right into the middle of Leela's business like an overenthusiastic puppy. (And oh god, baby!Kalinda the barback killed me. KILLED ME.)

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frequencyshift July 28 2012, 07:53:57 UTC
How're Alicia's eye-rolls ever NOT famous? I mean, have you seen those things? She does your average teenager proud, it's almost obnoxious it's so awesome. I'm glad you liked it, I had fun writing it!

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Re: Stray PT 4 rhyfeddu July 11 2012, 04:51:48 UTC
Fun, fun, fun, heartbreak, fun.

That is a destined relationship if you can get past thrown up nachos as a first impression. ;)

This was great. Feel free to continue this. I really, really want newly christened Kalinda to throw a wrench in that engagement of one Ms. Cavanaugh. It's like going back in time to kill baby Hitler! lol

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Re: Stray PT 4 frequencyshift July 28 2012, 07:55:53 UTC
Man, I've had the idea for a follow-on bouncing in my head for a while, but every time I sit down to write it it comes out full of angst, and that's not what I want for a sequel. I'm working on it - if I can ever get it to work, I'll make sure and post it to the lj group page!

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Re: Stray PT 4 tamoline July 17 2012, 19:04:18 UTC
A powerful story, well told. I particularly like the last line - it sound like a beginning rather than an end, and I'd like to read more.

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Re: Stray PT 4 frequencyshift July 28 2012, 07:56:41 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed it! No promises on a sequel, but I am knocking ideas about, and if I ever finish it I'll be sure to post!

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Re: Stray PT 4 sweetjamielee July 20 2012, 01:55:58 UTC
This is my favorite prompt I ever prompted, I swear. I've seen many different incarnations of Georgetown!Alicia and typically enjoy them, but the idea of baby Kalinda, and baby Alicia MEETING baby Kalinda, just... gah. THIS SHOULD HAVE HAPPENED.

I love how protective Alicia was right off the bat here -- blindly, maybe naively, but somehow seeming to like this stranger more than she likes her law student compatriots at the bar. And Kalinda's cautiousness, but inability to resist Alicia's drunken charms (puking aside!), feels right on. It really makes me want to know more... about Kalinda's mysterious marriage, but mostly about what comes next in this unlikely friendship. What are the chances of goading you into continuing??

In any case, SO enjoyed this. Thank you for it!

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Re: Stray PT 4 frequencyshift July 28 2012, 08:02:28 UTC
I usually stay away from Georgetown!Alicia because it means Georgetown!Will, and while I like him I don't want him anywhere near my Kalicia ^.^

I saw your prompt, and I just knew instantly what would happen. It didn't seem at all likely that they would be at school together, in my head. And living in the DC metro area, I can tell you that the Georgetown set are whole different beasts from the rest of DC - I mean, they don't have a metro stop because they want to keep the "vagrants" away - although that's not so much the students as those who live there, the mindset is pervasive. So then the idea of a bar, and having Kalinda work there... it just fell into place.

I want to write a continuation, but each time I try it gets all angsty and I want them to have fun first. So I'll keep working on it, and if I ever hammer it into a shape I like I'll be sure and post it on the lj group.

So glad you liked it!

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