I wrote this a little while ago, but never got around to posting it. I just added the last three stanzas. If you think they don't fit in well, just say so because I can take them out without being too terribly heartbroken
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O.o I really really really loved this. But something about the last stanza didn't seem to fit with the rest of the poem. Hmmm let me think this over...
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I really really really loved this.
But something about the last stanza didn't seem to fit with the rest of the poem. Hmmm let me think this over...
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we're keeping this. no question. it stays.
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