Loose Soul {The World Ends With You}

[supfandom]

Title: Loose Soul
Fandom: The World Ends With You. SURPRISE SURPRISE
Characters: Sanae Hanekoma, Raimu 'Rhyme' Bito
Genre: ...Gen and fluff? I really need to stop putting this here
Word Count: 1,443

FIRST REQUEST DONE! done for the super awesome lostscore who requested "Rhyme in all her infinite wisdom guesses the truth about what Mr. H is." they're not a

Comments

[supfandom]

thanks! it was my first time writing rhyme, but i really enjoyed it. all strong and soft at the same time <3 the one thing i wished i could have worked in more was her use of adages, but i couldn't seem to make them fit. though to cover myself, i'll just say it's 'cause she grew up and learned to use her own words. or something.

if you hit the fanwork: writing tag and scroll down a bit, sasha_janre actually wrote one :B

and as a coffee addict myself, i highly approve :B

[lostscore]

OH DEAR GOD I LOVE YOU *FAWNS*

I honestly was not expecting much, as it's this weird little pairing that popped into my head as another facet of weird crap for my darker fic and it has a lot of things going for it I very sparingly enjoy (such as an unusual age difference). It grew into something real for exactly the reason that I gave this prompt - they're two very reasonable, wise, smart individuals. I sort of expected a drabble and hence was blown away by the scope of it.

and Mr. H is a coffee addict and terribly hot and he needs to start being real so I can jump him*cough

[supfandom]

i've never been good at being able to convey an idea in just a few paragraphs. i need more narrative and visuals. i also wanted to explore how she figured it out, his reaction, her reaction, etc. mr. h's internal monologue can get rambly.

i was kind of nervous about writing rhyme, but i found her voice with relative ease--that rarely happens to me with a character. i normally have to start and drop a couple fics before i can get the hang of them.

the whole thing went pretty smoothly for me in general. it's really strange--i normally hit a wall and have to grind out the next few paragraphs. but the second i saw your prompt i had an idea and just kept throwing down a couple of sentences whenever i had time.

it might have something to do with how excited i was to write this in general <3 it was a great prompt that just settled happily into my brain.

i'm really glad that you enjoyed it. i know i sure as hell enjoyed writing it :D

[lostscore]

May I add you to my friendslist?

*sparklies?*

[supfandom]

of course!

-shinies-

[thetg]

I love it. :D Sanae is so deliciously yummy. And RHYME. Your Rhyme still comes off as wise yet adorable, even when she's older. <3

Write more on this pairing please? Rhyme doesn't get enough love, and Sanae can NEVER get enough love.

[supfandom]

i'm glad you liked it! :D next time i'll try and write something when they're actually, y'know, a couple xD

rhyme and mr h ALWAYS need more love <3

[thetg]

They DO need more love. XD *has been in a Sanae mood lately*

Also, friended you. XD Your stuff is awesome. I'd put sparkles there, but I'm a bit lazy.

[supfandom]

d'awwww, friends! -confetti- xD all my fics go in here, interspersed with random babblings :B

i'd put sparkles if i had any idea how :B

and i'm always in a sanae mood :D the next request on my list is mr. h selfcest.

[alukahnicapot]

The ending made me laugh hard enough to scare the sh!t out of my roommate. :) Very well written...Loved it. :)

[supfandom]

XD when i saw the prompt, i was thinking of how she might have figured it out and that was the first one that came to mind.

thanks for reading!

[supfandom]

there is <3 poor girl doesn't get enough credit.