Fanfiction: Heroes: I Won't Let You Fall Apart

[superkappa]

Title: I Won’t Let You Fall Apart
Author: superkappa
Rating: PG
Challenge: “Impotent” for sylelle_100
Summary: It would be so easy to bring his hand up and finish what he started back on Level Five. Set during 3x09

Comments

[quirkysmuse]

Interesting take on that scene. Loved it!

[superkappa]

Thank you!

[di_elle]

I like when you go inside Sylar mind, you do it very well, you gave me another angle I never thought at about that scene.

[superkappa]

I had never really thought about it either but then I was listening to "The Fragile" by Nine Inch Nails and it just sort of connected to me. I'm glad you like when I go inside Sylar's mind, it's always an interesting experience to me.

[petitebelette]

<3

[superkappa]

<3

[razycrandomgirl]

Wha? I thought you were making it right ...

H'm If only they hadn't shown her body being torched.

[superkappa]

Sometimes I like to make it right, but for this piece, I was exploring the scene in 3x09 when she stops electrocuting him and begs him to kill her. (The fact that he refuses to kill her here and then kills her two episodes later is a major annoyance still, but what can you do?)

[razycrandomgirl]

Oooooh I got my scenes mixed up.

I think if he left her alive it would have made him an interesting character. Though I kinda wished he would have "neutered her" (so to speak) so she couldn't hurt him.

Hell hath not fury ... and all that jazz

[superkappa]

It definitely would have made him more interesting if he left her alive.

I'm not sure I'm crazy about the idea of her being neutored or depowered though.

[stainofmylove]

Ooo--that is definitely a scene that I wouldn't have thought would lend itself to this prompt! Definitely original and interesting, great job.

[superkappa]

I wouldn't have either but I was listening to the song and it just clicked. So I went with it.