Fanfiction: Heroes: I Won't Let You Fall Apart

Jan 21, 2010 12:52

Title: I Won’t Let You Fall Apart
Author: superkappa
Rating: PG
Challenge: “Impotent” for sylelle_100
Summary: It would be so easy to bring his hand up and finish what he started back on Level Five. Set during 3x09

Before Everything Else, I Was Like You )

fanfic

Leave a comment

razycrandomgirl January 22 2010, 03:19:58 UTC
Wha? I thought you were making it right ...

H'm If only they hadn't shown her body being torched.

Reply

superkappa January 22 2010, 03:26:42 UTC
Sometimes I like to make it right, but for this piece, I was exploring the scene in 3x09 when she stops electrocuting him and begs him to kill her. (The fact that he refuses to kill her here and then kills her two episodes later is a major annoyance still, but what can you do?)

Reply

razycrandomgirl January 22 2010, 03:32:40 UTC
Oooooh I got my scenes mixed up.

I think if he left her alive it would have made him an interesting character. Though I kinda wished he would have "neutered her" (so to speak) so she couldn't hurt him.

Hell hath not fury ... and all that jazz

Reply

superkappa January 22 2010, 03:42:29 UTC
It definitely would have made him more interesting if he left her alive.

I'm not sure I'm crazy about the idea of her being neutored or depowered though.

Reply

razycrandomgirl January 22 2010, 03:54:22 UTC
I know, I know. But if he left her with her powers, it would be a pretty stupid thing to do.

That shit will bit you in the ass later.

Plus you don't wanna have that around the baby. :x

Reply

superkappa January 22 2010, 04:10:36 UTC
Well, I mean, it's not like she can kill him.

In my own personal canon, there is no baby. I'm pretty sure with or without powers, they'd just fuck a kid up.

Reply

razycrandomgirl January 22 2010, 05:35:10 UTC
I keep forgetting. She can't kill him, but she could still have made his life miserable.

Well, I don't expect them to make it work, but maybe on their own they can do better?

Reply

superkappa January 22 2010, 05:39:26 UTC
I suppose, but he could have made her life just as miserable in a lot of ways, I prefer there to be an even playing field.

Maybe. I think to think they could have.

Reply

razycrandomgirl January 22 2010, 05:43:30 UTC
I like my ladies to have tricks up their sleeves ... so to speak ...

do you like Elle/Gabriel?

ETA: your icon's so sweet!

Reply

superkappa January 22 2010, 06:09:20 UTC
I do too.

It depends, I don't like how a lot of people write Gabriel, soo...

Thank you!

Reply

razycrandomgirl January 22 2010, 06:11:56 UTC
lol

Jessica gives good Gabriel. hehehehehe

I was just wondering.

Reply

superkappa January 22 2010, 06:20:58 UTC
Yes she does, and so do a few other people I know.

Nothing wrong with wondering :)

Reply


Leave a comment

Up