Fanfiction: Heroes: Listening

[superkappa]

Title: Listening

Characters: Mohinder, Elle (not really shippy, but kind of?)

Rating: PG

Summary: AU after 3x07. What if Arthur had sent Mohinder to help Elle with her malfunctioning power instead of Sylar?

Comments

[ironjill]

lasdkjf I like it! ♥!

Especially the end! ._.

[superkappa]

Thank you! I was afraid the ending seemed a little abrupt, but I didn't know where to go with it :|

I'm glad you liked it ♥

[ironjill]

I really liked the end! It was kind of sweet! ;o;

♥~ I never get to read your Fic 'cause its Sylar/Elle and..aslkdfj Yeeeeah, you know. xD

BUT STILL. I GOT TO READ SOMETHING! ♥

[superkappa]

No, I figured. I don't expect people to read pairings they don't like XD

I wrote the one Elle/Claire one too? http://superkappa.livejournal.com/721907.html#cutid1

I don't know, I'm trying to branch out more as far as what I write XD

I'M GLAD YOU LIKED IT ♥

[aurilly]

Aww, this is just lovely, a really wonderful take on what could have been. The ending made me curl up happily into myself.

I love how Mohinder can see that his old Elle is still in there when she starts calling him by a nickname.

Thanks for sharing! :)

[superkappa]

I'm glad you liked that touch, I couldn't resist trying to put in a hint of her old self in there. Because even as devastated as she was, we all know that spunky Elle is still in there.

Thank you for reading!

[dragynflies]

Aww, Mohinder.

This was sweet and a nice take on what could have been without Sylar/Gabriel...maybe then our Elle would still be alive!!

[superkappa]

Well, I guess there could have been the risk of Momo cocooning her, but other than that, she could still be alive!

I'm glad you liked it!

[lemomina]

Oh Momo is such a nice guy ( even with his scales )
I liked this so much , specially the ending ;D

[superkappa]

He really is. I think that's what I love about Mohinder. Essentially, he is a really good guy (even though the writers seem to forget this sometimes)

I'm glad you liked it!

[di_elle]

really, the writers seems to dislike mohinder... and maybe I'm the only one, but I like his monologues and I miss them... :(

[superkappa]

I think Mohinder's character is the only one that's possibly been messed up as much as Sylar's. I didn't mind when occasionally, someone else did the monologues, but I loved Mohinder's the most.

[faded_facade]

Aw, Mohinder. And the ending is really sweet.

[superkappa]

I really enjoyed writing him. It wasn't nearly as hard as I somehow thought it would be. Thank you!