Breakdown

Nov 05, 2007 16:34

Title: Breakdown
Genre: Angst, Family, Hurt/Comfort

I'm starting to break down
Crying and shaking
On the bottom of myself
Not able to stand up again

I'm yelling at you, full in rage
Silently pleading underneath for you to stop
But you won't

It has been too long, too long
And by now I knw that ther'll never be
A way out

I'm starting to break down
Crying and ( Read more... )

writing, poetry

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sarcasticdaisy December 2 2007, 07:50:40 UTC
Wow. Very sad, but so wonderful. Reads kinda like song lyrics, very well written.

Thank You.

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sunshine_sean December 5 2007, 19:48:56 UTC
Thank you so much for reviewing. I think I should post more of the poems I wrote. Let me say there are a lot of them, really!

Love, Stephie

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