Comments | sunlight_dust: Dust in the Sunlight

sunlight_dust

Dust in the Sunlight

Apr 10, 2009 11:22

Title: Dust in the Sunlight
Pairing: Fernando Torres/Sergio Ramos
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 1,623
Disclaimer: Not real and I definitely would never want this to happen in real life. That being said, this doesn’t end happily. Sorry.
Summary: Sergio and Fernando have their last goodbye.
A/N: This is dedicated to Joe. I miss you more than I can ever express ( Read more... )

fic, sernando

Comments 51

dance_fairies April 10 2009, 18:58:26 UTC

Do I even want to read this? :P

dance_fairies April 10 2009, 19:01:22 UTC

*does a small jig of celebration for first place*
*goes back to bracing herself to read*

sunlight_dust April 10 2009, 19:06:44 UTC

*gives you small congratulations*

:/
be strong.

fantasy_parades April 10 2009, 18:58:32 UTC

asafkjasl;alslsl;afjd BAM!!!

fantasy_parades April 10 2009, 18:59:16 UTC

DAMNIT!
SECOND!!
...
ummm I'm scared to read this.

sunlight_dust April 10 2009, 19:08:25 UTC

Lamento tu posicion.
...
you don't have to.

fantasy_parades April 10 2009, 19:14:38 UTC

gracias.

I want to.
...I'll read it now...

Thread 10

sophiamoon April 10 2009, 19:09:31 UTC

This is so sad.

sunlight_dust April 10 2009, 19:11:09 UTC

:/ sorry

sophiamoon April 10 2009, 19:17:57 UTC

Don't be, sad stories need to be written too
(and hey, if I can do "ravages", then you can do this)

sunlight_dust April 10 2009, 19:29:25 UTC

yeah you're right, a sad story every once in a while is a nice change of pace I guess. :]

Thread 6

melj1213 April 10 2009, 19:16:15 UTC

OMG, this fic had me in tears, it was so beautifully written and so moving. I can't even put into words how much I loved and hated this fic at the same time because of the way you wrote the story and what I knew was going to happen - I felt a bit like Nando because I knew what was going to happen but just didn't want it to, but I couldn't pull myself away.

“I love you” they whispered simultaneously; instances they always cherished. A moment in time that Sergio would take with him for eternity.

This bit just killed me, it is so beautiful and yet tragic at the same time

sunlight_dust April 10 2009, 19:27:19 UTC

Oh I'm so sorry that it made you cry like that but I'm glad you did like it regardless of the outcome.
and thank you, that's really the feeling I was going for. I wanted everyone to know that he was going to die, there was no way around that but to just be there with him for those last minutes.

Thanks so much for the comment again.

melj1213 April 10 2009, 19:43:51 UTC

Don't apologise, it is the sign of a good writer if you can draw such emotion from your readers, and it shows that you have the skill to write in such a beautiful way that makes you forget that this isn't real and for a few moments it feels *soo real*

Thank you for writing such a beautifully sad story, it's always good to have a change of pace now and again :)

sunlight_dust April 10 2009, 19:57:00 UTC

That's seriously so sweet of you to say. It makes me feel really happy to know that people can get those types of emotions to sprout from reading the story.

:] I like to think so too. As long as we keep these types of stories in the fictional world, all is well.

lamechante April 10 2009, 20:03:45 UTC

That fic almost made me cry ç_ç

He released the puddles of tears from his eyes as he watched a path of dust dancing in the sunlight

I don't know how to say that, but this is one of the fics that I liked most written by you cause it seems to me that it describes you a bit. I don't know why >,>

Anyway, it's wonderful and I am moved by this pearl <3

sunlight_dust April 10 2009, 20:15:21 UTC

:[

I don't know how to say that, but this is one of the fics that I liked most written by you cause it seems to me that it describes you a bit. I don't know why >,>

It kinda does actually. The line you quoted is something a friend of mine that passed told me. Every time I see a scene like that, I think of him.

Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
<3