[oneshot] "Chi-chink", Isshi x Nao

[blindcottonlove]

CHI-CHINK

Fandom: Kagrra,
Pairing(s): Isshi x Nao
Genre(s): (an attempt at) humor, fluff
Rating: PG-13-ish
Warnings: Isshi might seem a bit cuckoo in this, I totally lost his true personality XD; But other than that, nothing major to warn about. Bad jokes, mainly.

Summary: A football upsets Shin, Shin upsets Isshi and Isshi upsets Izumi.

Comments

[jali_susundeiru]

Hehe not bad. There's some random other language skewed in there, you might want to erase that.

This was written in a way I so want to draw out as manga XD

[blindcottonlove]

Yeah, lol, I wrote this initally in Finnish, then translated into English and apparently, I missed a part. But, now it's gone, as well as some other mistakes I spotted~~

..........*---* Nao and Isshi being total babies would make amazing pictures!! :DDD

Thank you for reading♥

[jali_susundeiru]

Kiyoharu! *_*

[blindcottonlove]

Kiyoharu, the senpai love of my dreams~♥

[blindcottonlove]

;D you're very, very welcome~~ and about the balls... if they survive alive from this, I'm content to believe that Nao won't learn his lesson XD; and with those brown eyes, it's not difficult to induce Isshi to play with him~~

[elindar]

awwww, omg! what can i say? i read this last night already. it was 3am and i was __just going to bed and then saw this fic here and went all "aaaaaaaa~ *-----*"

haha, but yea. first of all, i love it. the fic was so adorable and it made me laugh and smile many many times, and that's the best thing a fic can ever do!
the idea was super! XDD i can so imagine nao bounching the ball and being a total thunder storm with it. you had written him so well. a total, loveable dork~ and isshi being "the rational adult". i liked him here, too. but shin. omg, shin! what did you do to him, he was soooo great in this! especially the part "now Nao and the ball. Thank you. Before somebody gets hurt." convinced me. aa, the little shin with HUEG authority was one of best things in this~ 8DD

i'd like to quote so many parts here, but i think i'd ended up quoting the all fic, and that wouldn't be good. just gotta say i loved the dialogue between the members and between isshi and nao. and the ending totally cracked me. XDDD
-- and not even Akiya, who tried

[blindcottonlove]

^o^\,,/ SUCCESSSSS!!! YEYYYY! *dance*

I'm sooo glad this was to your liking~~~ I'm a little out of my box when writing humor/crack so I was indescribably nervous^^' but you liked it, so all's well in the world♥ I liked the way this story got started; I think I need a fic request meme now :333 Without you throwing "football" in the air, I'd never gone for this little storyline here~

SHIN OHMIGOD, he became my favourite "writeable" by this story^____^~<3 His rage<3 I think this Badass Shin has arrived to stay >DD

INDEED YAY FOR KAGRRA, BEING SO INSPIRING!!^o^

[jikhyun]

omg that was mad assed funny! loved " especially my balls! "