Fanfiction: Trigger

[summonersanctum]

Woah! Writing ._. I dedicate this to kat8cha to whom without, I probably wouldn't have written this. I think this is one of the best fanfics I've written to date *claps for self

Comments

[alanahikarichan]

I believe the appropriate response is, what was it, GUH.

May I suggest that the first bit could use a bit of proofreading and editing? Some of the structure was a little awkward. After that, it's made of awesome and brainmelt and nosebleed and yey. ♥

[grandsummoner]

Yeah, suggest away! This was written, as bad as it sounds, really early in the morning, so I'll go back over it now

and thank you! ^_^

[kat8cha]

XDDD Ah ha ha YAY DEDICATION!

I swear to return the favor (Really Really!) and omg Sano you're so quick. XD

[grandsummoner]

XDDD, of course!!

Really? cool! ^_^ (of course he's quick. Controling time and stuff~)

[x_beautyaintall]

It was *squeak*! *o* 'Twas hee~! (I can't form sentences very well, hurr. My brain go boom. :D!)

[grandsummoner]

^_^ Yay~ I'm glad you liked it. I hope you're able to form sentences soon. Don't we all have school tomorrow XD?

[kageling]

I agree with alanahikarichan. That was great. But yeah, there are some errors running around it, so you may want to have a beta run it over. X3

[grandsummoner]

will do ^_^

Ah ha! Love it!

[realladyred06]

i loved it! A

XD I finally figured out how to comment right. XD

Re: Ah ha! Love it!

[grandsummoner]

D'awww! Thank you!