i see your empty lies (don't leave me)

[summerrainsonme]

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[summerrainsonme]

spot for si min.

[envybleedsgreen]

I will give you a proper comment, because holy shit, this fic is a masterpiece.

It takes a while - a second - for him to realize that it's his voice that's screaming.
At first I thought that it was Kyungsoo's parents that were fighting, but this line made me see if was really Jongin and he that were doing so.

Jongin drinks too much.
I felt the horror from that sentence before I read it.

and some part of him says that there's no hope anyway, so drown while you can.
Drown while you can. /Drown while you can./ Oh, my freaking gosh, this line totally took me. I am screaming so hard right now, because I can't. I really honestly can't.

I understand what you mean when you say that writing this tore you apart. It tore me apart just by reading it, so you conveyed your feelings really truly in this.

Also, you are an amazing writer. I love the way you lie about that. Stop denying it, because you /are/.

Mei mei should also never make puns. They are bad.

[summerrainsonme]

ugh bb I'll always love your comments, proper or not ;-;

I think drinking in all fics like these (( and in general, alcohol is a terrible thing ;-; )) can never mean anything good OTL

...I'm guessing the line was a hooker?

.../is reminded of the Hot Summer joke OTL

thank you bb~ I'm glad that some feelings got through ;;;; /jiejie forever crying

[envybleedsgreen]

I know. T_T Drinking does bad things [which you will see in my runandgun entry, LOL].

FOR ME, YES? WELL, LAST LINE IS THE HOOKER, SO KINDA... ER... YEAH.

I never said the Hot Summer joke to you. ;-;

Jie jie is forever good at expressing emotions!

[changdictator]

ohhhhh WOW.
just wow.
just a lot of wows in general.

I'm such an incoherent mess after this. Your writing is so emotional and heavy and it hurts so good omg ;; I love the way you use words and the fluidity and everything and yes yes yes just yes in general :)

[summerrainsonme]

dkjfsaoijfkadaskfhuiashka

thank you so much ;-; pretty I cried while writing this OTL probably where the emotion came from ;;

also djnhskfjhadjsf can i fangirl because i'm a huge fan of your fics and omg you commented on my horrible ones why ;-;

[changdictator]

UGH NOTHING TO THANK You deserved every word and like twice as many that I didn't put down because I was too blown out of my mind omg. LOL writing while crying is seriously one of the best (Y)

I think I just cried while reading your response? wtf you're too good a writer to fangirl anything of mine omg ahhhhhh i feel like i'm a fangirl of you more than you are of me LOL

[summerrainsonme]

omg thank you again ;-; wait I should probably stop saying thank you OTL

no really I love your kaisoo fics ;-; thought I probably am more of your fangirl OTL we can be fangirls of each other? wait ignore me .-.

[playfulmelodies]

brb AAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH WHAT EVEN I CAN'T
I WOULD LEAVE A NICE COMMENT
BUT I CAN'T
SOBS

[summerrainsonme]

/cries with you

thank you for reading ;-;

[thisismylastlie]

ohmygosh I can't -
this is just so freakin' beautiful that it hurts my heart ;_;
how they keep coming back to each other, even after destroying each other.
them being the sickness and the medicine at the same time.
and it's portrayed so well.
your words are so beautiful /cries.
I'd quote it all but I'm on my iPod.
but really, this is so amazing :')

[summerrainsonme]

thank you bb ;; /hugs

[pikachancalok]

this.is.so.amazing. i just-sdfghjhnjk
i want to write proper comment but my english kinda failed me right now, so yeah.
/cries

[summerrainsonme]

/cries with you

thanks for reading ;-;