I completely forgot to make one of these. This'll be my crit rawket post for A.B.A, so any criticism (ANY criticism, I'd rather you say I'm completely screwing up her character than to allow me to wallow in my inaccuracy and shame myself) or questions you can address to this post. I openly invite anyone to ask any questions they want, though I can' ( Read more... )

[Voice]
Ah, so much has happened... I forgot to keep using this thing...

[Some awkward shuffling, she's trying to think of what to say.]

I guess... I could ask if anyone has any advice on how to plan a wedding....?

[Video/Action Post (Grey text is Paracelsus)]
[Again we see A.B.A and Paracelsus, out and about today. Of course, today, Paracelsus has a pretty bow on his collar, and A.B.A's got a heart-shaped key on her belt instead of the normal one.]

A.B.A, there's evil about! Time to fight!

R-Right!

[Suddenly, have your semi-standard magical girl ( Read more... )

[Voice]
Hmm..... I think I saw some people from home the other day... Ah, M-Megumi, did you see your friend.....? You have a lot of them, though....

I wonder how long I've been gone...

[Some flipping of paper; she's looking at a calendar]

...... Ah.... It's been a whole year.....

[Trinity Hall//Action]
[And here's young A.B.A, former homeschooling student sent to attend the all-girls school by her father so she could go out and see the world a little. Of course, all those years of isolation and comfortable living at Father's mansion/lab haven't done much for her people skills, so she's absolutely PETRIFIED. Her lack of ( Read more... )

[Video Post]
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[Video Post//Grey=Paracelsus]
[The young red-haired woman with the key through her skull, pale skin, and green eyes underlined by dark lines can be seen in front of the device. She's dressed casually in light bandage wrappings, small but negligible blood spots here and there. It's unclear whether they're fresh or not. From the perspective it seems ( Read more... )

[Voice]
Nnn... Today was supposed to be a good day... I made some chocolate for Paracelsus, but...

[The muffled voice of Paracelsus can be heard in what sounds like a closet, but it's hard to tell what he's saying.]

.... Uwaaaah... I don't like him like this... I-It's not right... It isn't really him this way... It just doesn't feel right...I-I ( Read more... )

[Voice Post]
Mm, the haircut looks nice~... It feels soft and fluffy~...

I'm amazed they managed to get around the key...

Now we're finished with all of the tributes, correct~? What a relief~... Now that all of that's out of the way...

Megumi, um... There was something I wanted to talk to you about... About Paracelsus...

[Voice Post//Grey=Paracelsus]
Uwaah.... I want that curse to come back... He finally had a body... It was warm...

[A couple of sniffles]

... I suppose we should at least be happy that we've completed this decree...

You didn't really expect me to stay like that, did you?

[A frustrated moan and shuffling; she's been moping in her room since the ( Read more... )