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Sep 30, 2006 17:17

Chapter Eight

Lee was so absorbed in his thoughts that he didn’t realise someone was climbing up to the lookout until they were nearly at the top.

Glancing down, he saw to his relief that it was only Cally, but he gave himself a mental kick.  What if it had been a Cylon?  He couldn’t allow himself to get distracted like that.

He wasn’t too ( Read more... )

bsg fic - promises

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jatnj September 30 2006, 16:50:17 UTC
I love how Lee is giving Kara a taste of her own medicine by pushing HER away this time. That whole lookout conversation was awsome!

I won't get tired of saying how much I like this Lee.

I hope you had nice holiday.. don't think about Monday just yet. :)

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suffolkgirl September 30 2006, 16:55:37 UTC
Yes, got the whole of Sunday before I need to think about Monday! I had a lovely holiday, thanks, I really needed the break and feel much better for it.

Glad you liked this chapter, I had fun doing the whole role reversal thing with Kara trying to get Lee to talk and him lashing out at her. I was a bit worried he came across as being rather nasty to Kara in this chapter so glad you still like him :-)

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jatnj September 30 2006, 17:03:44 UTC
I think she got a little of what she deserved. She does take Lee for granted, but obviously he has a breaking point and she pushed him past it.

I'm a huge L/K 'shipper, but sometimes he can be such a lap dog. It's nice to see him bite every now and then. :)

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suffolkgirl September 30 2006, 17:34:00 UTC
I completely agree - he needs to call her on her crap more often than he does on the show. So I make him do it in fiction!
I always think with Lee it takes a lot to make him lose it, but when he does he knows just what to say to push the knife in - that comment in Scar about Kara only being able to deal with the dead guys, for example.

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jatnj September 30 2006, 17:40:53 UTC
Yes. Lee is an expert knife twister.

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