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pinguthegreek January 30 2010, 18:20:44 UTC
I love this, but would you mind if I made a really little Britpick ?

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elenopa January 30 2010, 18:29:23 UTC
You're talking about the spelling of grey aren't you?

I love it too. The ending made me cry.

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pinguthegreek January 30 2010, 18:30:14 UTC
Nope, not that. It's a tiny niggle, but we don't use the word gift so much. I think Donna would call it a present.

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sue_denimme January 30 2010, 19:40:13 UTC
Ah. Noted. See, that's one of the little things that's hard for an American (even one who's an Anglophile) to pick up on.

As to the spelling... I've always had a bit of a dilemma with that. I try to get the British tone down as much as possible, wording-wise, but I've got it in my head that if I also tried to spell everything the British way, it would be insulting the intelligence of British readers, especially if I betray my American-ness in some other way (like gift/present). Is that a silly concern, or should I go ahead and write "grey" and "colour" and "favourite"?

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watashinokokoro January 30 2010, 18:45:27 UTC
Awwwww! That's really cute... and sad. I love it :-)

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sue_denimme January 30 2010, 19:56:40 UTC
Glad you enjoyed it!

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reluctanthero27 January 30 2010, 18:46:36 UTC
I really liked this. Beautiful, funny and sad all at the same time.

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sue_denimme January 30 2010, 19:57:09 UTC
Thank you. :-)

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selenak January 30 2010, 18:47:48 UTC
Oh, I love it.

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sue_denimme January 30 2010, 19:57:52 UTC
Glad you enjoyed it.

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fatchickengirl January 30 2010, 19:09:04 UTC
Lovely very Donna, very 10 and very sweet...

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sue_denimme January 30 2010, 19:58:02 UTC
Thanks!

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