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doodasnapefreak in sue_assassins

Hogwarts Overexposed: Chapter Sixteen

Oct 15, 2010 17:27

Comments 13

turtlecrackers October 15 2010, 19:14:23 UTC

Damn it, poor Nora. She survived, and had to get treated by Caitlin.

... You know, I don't care if Dick gets eaten or not. In fact, I'd put money on the spider if I didn't know that Neil's cliffhangers never amount to anything interesting. Seriously, Neil, why should I care about a character who has been portrayed to be pretty much one of the worst people on the planet in your own words?

This is just silly. Are we really supposed to take Rishard and this competition seriously? It's impossible!

doodasnapefreak October 16 2010, 01:52:34 UTC

The day Neil actually kills off one of his Sues (and they stay dead), I will streak the army base I live next to. He may threaten to, he may abuse time, but there is never any real peril. Basically, I hate him.

scarsofloki January 2 2013, 00:40:18 UTC

Off-topic, but, oh my god, you live by an army base? You lucky person ;_;

thebitterend327 October 15 2010, 21:34:44 UTC

No one lands on their head and walks away with only a mild concussion and broken shoulder, at least not from the height Neil seemed to be referring to. Thanks to his idiocy Nora, the only likeable character lives to suffer again. I can,t believe people actually read this unsporked.

doodasnapefreak October 16 2010, 01:46:55 UTC

It's really inconsistent, too, because the platforms were described as being five feet off the ground, but sometimes it's described as being a HUGE height. But then again, if she landed on her head, she would have had some serious neck damage. Basically, Neil fails at everything.

turtlecrackers October 16 2010, 15:14:14 UTC

Exactly. The way he was describing Jamie and Caitlin helping Nora to climb the ladder, it seemed to me that the ladder was at least ten feet off the ground. Because five feet, that's what? six steps on a normal ladder?

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doodasnapefreak October 16 2010, 01:48:59 UTC

I giggled at "penis spider" because I have the most juvenile sense of humor ever, and the idea of giant dongs with eight legs distracted from the sheer awfulness of the story.

scarsofloki January 2 2013, 00:42:32 UTC

I was imagining a giant spider-body with dongs for legs.

zelda_queen October 16 2010, 04:20:29 UTC

"Draco is spying on Slytherin & Minions. I'm guessing this was written before HBP, because supposedly he's just learning Occlumency now ( ... )

autumntwilight_ October 16 2010, 08:17:11 UTC

Acromantulas.

zelda_queen October 16 2010, 13:14:56 UTC

Ah yes, thank you. ^^;

autumntwilight_ October 16 2010, 08:21:54 UTC

Why do they keep TALKING about their beautiful and innocent nakedness ALL THE TIME. Seriously, it's infuriating. When you've just nearly survived from breaking your neck you don't start conversing about how you don't mind seeing Sues naked. The worst part is that we've read these exchanges ten times already! Neil just seems to be copy+pasting his old "nudity rules" speeches to every chapter.