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Coloris- Chapter 2 Part 2

Jul 02, 2010 04:43

Coloris co-write with ozgasmic
Rating: R
Pairing: future JoshuaNeku and other various
Summary: A year has passed since the monumental Game and Neku Sakuraba's life is anything but interesting. At least, until Joshua lays out the cards and gives the teen the Ace of Hearts: a position in the Reaper's Game previously unknown to him. But what exactly does it ( Read more... )

fanwork: writing

Comments 9

eraldaine July 1 2010, 18:45:24 UTC

Sorry about the double post; it took what little brain power I had left to figure out how to work the goddamn previous chapter links, nevermind learn the talent to link off both part one and two =w=;;;

And oh god, dear; how many parts is chapter 3 going to be? 6? XD <3

ozgasmic July 2 2010, 02:11:39 UTC

PROBABLY BECAUSE OF THE -- LOLOL.

sob.

eraldaine July 3 2010, 09:13:33 UTC

.w. the double LOLOL.

starcrossed_sky July 1 2010, 18:52:37 UTC

Bwahaha I cabn't wait to see how many parts the next one is...

Loved it, would comment more, but gotta run.

eraldaine July 3 2010, 09:12:50 UTC

Oh, its STILL going. I'm starting to seriously consider at least 4. We might debate splitting it into two chapters, actually...

Thank you dear, keep writing!

lazzchan July 1 2010, 21:07:39 UTC

^__^

Awesome, I really love this so far!

eraldaine July 3 2010, 09:13:59 UTC

Thank you dear, coming from you its very much appreciated indeed! <3

hyt_ruby626 July 2 2010, 17:08:27 UTC

I love the way you two write XDD

The minute details are just awesome. They're not TOO descriptive, just the right amount.
I can easily follow and picture every scene: the characters positions in a certain place;
their expressions and emotions; and of cause their interactions. The flow is smooth and
it's like your words are putting images in my mind. Keep up the great work!

Ruby

eraldaine July 3 2010, 09:17:32 UTC

Oh, my dear, your comment has sent my heart aflutter, I swear. <3333

I find, with Kat, that detailing each scene with the perfect imagery is just too easy; she's a fantastic author to write with because she flows everything so easily and adds the perfect amount of details to each scene. And stops certain scenes when I really don't want to~

Thank you so much darling; your comment is a treasure to read, it really is.

Daine