the problem with fiction (08/10ish)

[stupidrhapsody]

kris/chanyeol | R
summary: that's right, this is your usual idol oppa/ordinary high school boy fake engagement story. unless you never read one. you know, you should click the link.

author notes: please pay attention to unmentioned, but hopefully not confusing timeline

Comments

[exoz]

spot on!!

edited-

what the heck have I just read......

brb... need to read it again....

[exoz]

faker... wth?!?!.. dammit jdhfgiaudshfsdahfiasohsio *i need to gather my wits

[stupidrhapsody]

trooollololololo seems like some people need to reread this twice *run*

anyway.

[exoz]

- I know he didnt sleep on th esofa, just for that nite when he called baekhyun, he almost fallen asleep there.

- and kris has his reasons aha aha aha. let's see what's going to happen.<- will wait for this! will pay attention at it!

- I really wonder if .. Kris understand Chanyeol really in his advance level playbook or if he also a little bit reading something wrong. Coz if he really 'understand', he shouldn't be mad with chanyeol's 'it's just sex' comment coz he'd know that's chanyeol's way of playing 'he's supposed to be playin it cool in front of kris' act. so.. kris got a slip on that one too aye.. kkkhhhh

- still hung up from the last sentence. it might seems rainbow is comin but hell no.. i'm thinkin of a rainstorm or a shipwreck instead. coz it's nearing the climax.. even though you said once this story would probably end in +10 chapters still.. shipwreck before the rainbows..

and let's see if the gif would show up or not

sincerely,

[quirknblurb]

1. Why are you quizzing yer reader? GDI. I want to read not to be quizzed

2. Wow, I'm glad I vouch TPWF as the title. Excellent analogy dude

3. Oh Canada. Legal gay marriage. Is this heading to that direction?

Because I'm gonna have a meeting in 10' brb later with gifs

[quirknblurb]

Because your q's no. 1 - 3, are leading questions for us psyche people, imma answer: yes, yes, yes

For q4: character wise because chanyeolla is all carpe diem now baby, so he has no time to really absorb the experience,from kris' pov because he's angry both to himself and chanyeolla, hence the 'face down' position? Story wise because there will be inevitable breakdown later?

Kaihun stole this chapter jsyk. Interesting. Kay where's chap 9?

Kthxbai

[stupidrhapsody]

For q4: character wise because chanyeolla is all carpe diem now baby, so he has no time to really absorb the experience, from kris' pov because he's angry both to himself and chanyeolla, hence the 'face down' position? Story wise because there will be inevitable breakdown later?

[quirknblurb]

chanyeol sandwiches himself in between the two loverboys, touching jongin’s chest in order to calm him down but then sehun screams at him, “DON’T YOU DARE!” and chanyeol is a little bit too late to grab jongin because jongin is already slamming sehun to the locked door of their school’s rooftop; where they usually have lunch together.

“it was you, wasn’t it, oh fucking sehun,” jongin hisses, pressing a chocolate arm against sehun’s milky throat. “are you jealous now? why do you think i’ve never tried that fucking low trick at you, huh? i have years to make you see that i only have my eyes on you.”

Because the spin of emotions dude. It's like when yer sixteen again and angry and frustrated because you're in love and you can't handle it, because shit, love is supposed to be happy and not painful like that.

Now. Chapter 9.

Yep. Psychic.

[jlloves]

Yayyayayayayay, update. Will reply to pm soon/tomorrow o7

[prpldrkrse]

spotting

[trish3815]

I do not care how much you want to help a friend.. you never kiss that friend.. EVER!! they should have just gone out together without Sehun but what they did could have turned out really bad

[stupidrhapsody]

dude, trish, it's not chanyeol's fault. sehun is just too bratty for his own good. he took kaiyeol's picture and then he spread it to the media because of jealousy. he's just ... in denial haha.
chanyeol is a victim. again.

then Kris goes to giving him the silent treatment
again.. who is the oldest here.. or is he thinking that Chanyeol isn't taking it seriously enough about their feelings.. "its just sex"... I cannot believe Chanyeol said that..
let's wait what's gonna happen on the next chapter yo.
and ... yeah that was the time gap i was talking about on my author notes. so after sex, a time gap, then christmas/new year's eve holiday for chanyeol so he's back home. yeah, hopefully it will clear out things dude. and let's pray for the best for them forever.

thanks so much for the comment.