trolooolloolololololol KARA. look what i've done again in this chapter. of course, gyuri-noona is the best. i wrote onkey fic once, with gyuri as onew's gurlfran. say what. KARA is my number one girl group, then followed by misseu A (fei-noona in corset, me ded).
then, gongju-yah. goddammit, of course sehun is a princess. anyone who ships hunhan, and writing/liking thehun to top lu han is clearly...you know...either blind or doesn't want their oppa to bottom. but fucking please. lu han tops, if i ever have to read a hunhan, thankfully i don't because i did some research and everyone loves some lu han the damsel in distress. fucking funny. trooololollololololololool high five you too dammit. of course, sekai will have more role ahem.
TPWF section 1: but chanyeol would be so fictional, so unrealistic if he always acted happily and smiley,like some lead female characters in dramas, oh no tits not rich not smart nothing but a warm heart OH PLEASE. chanyeol has every kind of emotion. i don’t know if chanyeol is your ultimate bias in exo or exo k, but here, in your own story, you seem to love him very much. writers are always in love with their own characters so lmao, it’s okay, even more than okay. thanks to it you can persistently portray every detail in the portrait of chanyeol, right from the start, so that readers can sympathize with him to the max. without this, okay, chanyeol the warm hearted lead male character of abc drama is having problems with fiction, that’s all i can say in that case. i have no bias, but my bro is xiumin. to me, chanyeol has the absolute face; so perfect, so beautiful. then, there's his natural cheerful personality, and plus, an analysis on "kpop secret tumblr"; an anon said she/he doesn't think chanyeol is this funny/derp. like, look at his face. seems like he's doing "scrunching his nose, making fool of himself, making weird faces" because no one in exo can be compared to his beauty. i was like, fucking fuck, that's. fucking. it. i decided to delve deeper, by writing him not just in the surface like we always see him as the "chanyeolla from exo derp squad"; i am trying to portray him as humanly possible so maybe either you can relate to him (here, in this fic) and/or you know someone who thinks/behaves like him (in this fic).
kris = here's the second interlude, and am i still writing him persistently? do you get him, kris wufan of TPWF, at all?
thanks for liking chanyeol's appa. he's just too hopeless about xiumin in here. and bacon, i realise this a little bit too late but as chanyeol's bff he should have more lines crying. why ted. i will fix it. he will do something that trigger chanyeol to---okay i will stop here ahem.
about the so pg it hurts rating of the fic, i don’t think we can have them going any further because, kris treasures chanyeol so much he’s afraid chanyeol’d be broken, remember what he said to his ma, “i will never be able to pay him back, ma, i’m aware of that fact. i need your support, okay, i don’t want to hurt him”.
anyway, we always can hope for an extra story or a sequel teehee, right, teddy ? right ? i have to say, the high demand of raising the rating really got on my brain. like ted, maybe you could just write lotsa fucking standalone smutty fics to satisfy their thirst. and i will, yeah, but TPWF started with horny!krisus, right, trooolololololololololololololol. the NC-17 will eventually happen. and maybe i won't stop on chapter ten, like i've planned thoroughly, since i have a whole new fucking plot for TPWF, my life, the one and only trooloollololllolol.
okay that's my reply dude, and here is my other, um, you know. like, write me another essay dude; the interval between these two chapters and the last posted chapter is too fucking long. tell me anything; maybe a weird OOC, some inconsistent on my part writing about whatever. anything. hm.
so yeah dude. looking forward for you to read and comment. have a naisu day yo.
then, gongju-yah. goddammit, of course sehun is a princess. anyone who ships hunhan, and writing/liking thehun to top lu han is clearly...you know...either blind or doesn't want their oppa to bottom. but fucking please. lu han tops, if i ever have to read a hunhan, thankfully i don't because i did some research and everyone loves some lu han the damsel in distress. fucking funny. trooololollololololololool high five you too dammit.
of course, sekai will have more role ahem.
TPWF section 1:
but chanyeol would be so fictional, so unrealistic if he always acted happily and smiley,like some lead female characters in dramas, oh no tits not rich not smart nothing but a warm heart OH PLEASE. chanyeol has every kind of emotion. i don’t know if chanyeol is your ultimate bias in exo or exo k, but here, in your own story, you seem to love him very much. writers are always in love with their own characters so lmao, it’s okay, even more than okay. thanks to it you can persistently portray every detail in the portrait of chanyeol, right from the start, so that readers can sympathize with him to the max. without this, okay, chanyeol the warm hearted lead male character of abc drama is having problems with fiction, that’s all i can say in that case.
i have no bias, but my bro is xiumin. to me, chanyeol has the absolute face; so perfect, so beautiful. then, there's his natural cheerful personality, and plus, an analysis on "kpop secret tumblr"; an anon said she/he doesn't think chanyeol is this funny/derp. like, look at his face. seems like he's doing "scrunching his nose, making fool of himself, making weird faces" because no one in exo can be compared to his beauty. i was like, fucking fuck, that's. fucking. it. i decided to delve deeper, by writing him not just in the surface like we always see him as the "chanyeolla from exo derp squad"; i am trying to portray him as humanly possible so maybe either you can relate to him (here, in this fic) and/or you know someone who thinks/behaves like him (in this fic).
kris = here's the second interlude, and am i still writing him persistently? do you get him, kris wufan of TPWF, at all?
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about the so pg it hurts rating of the fic, i don’t think we can have them going any further because, kris treasures chanyeol so much he’s afraid chanyeol’d be broken, remember what he said to his ma, “i will never be able to pay him back, ma, i’m aware of that fact. i need your support, okay, i don’t want to hurt him”.
anyway, we always can hope for an extra story or a sequel teehee, right, teddy ? right ?
i have to say, the high demand of raising the rating really got on my brain. like ted, maybe you could just write lotsa fucking standalone smutty fics to satisfy their thirst. and i will, yeah, but TPWF started with horny!krisus, right, trooolololololololololololololol. the NC-17 will eventually happen. and maybe i won't stop on chapter ten, like i've planned thoroughly, since i have a whole new fucking plot for TPWF, my life, the one and only trooloollololllolol.
okay that's my reply dude, and here is my other, um, you know. like, write me another essay dude; the interval between these two chapters and the last posted chapter is too fucking long. tell me anything; maybe a weird OOC, some inconsistent on my part writing about whatever. anything. hm.
so yeah dude. looking forward for you to read and comment. have a naisu day yo.
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