Switchblade - 7

Jan 18, 2012 16:12

Chapter 7 )

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strongbabypanda January 18 2012, 21:35:43 UTC
lefty_215 January 18 2012, 22:23:31 UTC
This is perfection~.

JAAAAAAAY. SUNGMINNNNNN. My heart.....

Taemin, you beautifully broken child.

No, you're destined. You have to save Minho. You have to redeem yourself.

THIS. THISSSSSSSSSSSS. ;~;

He looks once at Sungmin's face. It's strange. Taemin was sure he saw his face earlier, but now, his eyes have closed, and though his face is pale, he looks peaceful.

"Forgive me, Sungmin, oh please.." Taemin curls up on the floor next to him, continuing to plead, "Please forgive me.."

SO GOOD. Oh oh.. Taemin....

And the whole 'it's better to join them than to fight, we'll all lose..' kinda stuff... Freaking me out so good. Like seriously freaks me out. /can't express

Jaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay.... Momma Jay.../jears

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soypants January 18 2012, 22:13:49 UTC
Taemin shoved the newspaper down on the office's desk.

These flashbacks always throw me for a loop @_@

He was trying to help you. He was only pretending. You're a murderer.

My heart dropped to the pit of my stomach at this ;A; Sungmin DDDDD:

Taemin shakes his head, lifting his switchblade up to his neck. As easy as it's been to kill others..

DDDDDDD:

"Forgive me, Sungmin, oh please.." Taemin curls up on the floor next to him, continuing to plead, "Please forgive me.."

Taemin is so damaged DDDDDDD: I felt like crying over Sungmin DDDDDD:

Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one!

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wilmis January 19 2012, 04:04:19 UTC
Taemin is officially crazy.

However twisted this chapter may be, I love it. Just the way you describe his addicition and insanity really moves me. You were made to write this lolXD

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