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strongbabypanda April 30 2011, 20:49:36 UTC
lefty_215 May 1 2011, 00:00:36 UTC
dsifjsiodgjfdoigj Less than 10 parts before we surpass OWs chapter count. fghfgjfnf But all good sequels are longer~~~

fgjdfklgjdfkdh singing/humming for a coping mechanism. LOVE IT. poor Taemin was just starting to get better from his PTSD and then ALL this.

I love all the like, hazy-ness of this.

until finally they shoved him aside and he was dangerously close to the edge of the bed, but he would have loved to rolled off if he could just find the energy to move. The further away, the better.

ldkfnskdjgndfkjgndg TAEMIN.

never letting him just slip into sweet unconsciousness, and in that moment, Taemin realized he wanted to die.

He wasn't a vampire hunter - he was more like a burden on the others. He wasn't a normal kid - he never had been. His own mother wouldn't miss him if he died now.

HEART RIPPED OUT. TAEMIN. I haven't felt for Taemin for awhile, so this just..guhhhhhhhh..... My heart.

Before he could start thinking of ways to kill himself or simply get the vampires to do it for him, his mind was scattered again ( ... )

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Part 2.... lefty_215 May 1 2011, 00:01:30 UTC
"Help me get Minho back. Without Minho, I don't have a weakness for you to exploit anyway. It's good for both of us."

LAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWL Gets Minho back. Back to drama with JongKey. Minho still forever hates his life.

"Yet you obviously still care about him, and he obviously still cares about you, so... how is it not a weakness again?"

"You can't use it." Onew said, raising a brow.

Onew, you need to just stop talking now. LOLOLOL

"The Council will respect you more if you're not such a little suck up."

LAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWL

"Done." Key said. "But no one knows about this. Ever."

"You think I'd admit to needing your help?" Onew asked, walking out of the room with Key.

LOLOLOL Like how they're like Onew and Jong in OW. LAWWL

"You can kill me now... please kill me."

DDDDDDDDDDDD:

"I just want to die," Taemin whined, "Even Noodle.. Even Onew..."

"Abandoned you?" Jonghyun asked, softening. "Yeah. I've been there.." ldkfjsdklgfkgdflnbgkdflgdbg TAEMIN. MY HEART. Also, that's gotta hurt seeing Onew fighting so hard for his ( ... )

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Re: Part 2.... lefty_215 May 1 2011, 00:03:09 UTC
Oh... I see I'm one of the only who felt really bad for Taemin here... I see... /backwards forever

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Re: Part 2.... strongbabypanda May 1 2011, 00:07:51 UTC
I just figured either I did some ultimate writing fail, or some evil bitches were reading this. LAWLLL *I* feel bad for Taemin. XD XD ♥ ♥

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Re: Part 2.... lefty_215 May 1 2011, 00:30:38 UTC
Nope, the writing was amazing. I was feeling hopeless with Taemin. And whenever you bring his mom up you know I sadface. So if I didn't feel bad for him, I'd have been all 'LOLOLOL TAEMIN IDEC. *mom is mentioned* DDDDDDDDDDD:'.

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Re: Part 2.... strongbabypanda May 1 2011, 00:31:59 UTC
LOL Taemin's mom, the secret weapon

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Re: Part 2.... lefty_215 May 1 2011, 00:33:13 UTC
TRUTH.

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Re: Part 2.... strongbabypanda May 1 2011, 00:17:56 UTC
"Also, that's gotta hurt seeing Onew fighting so hard for his new human when just threw Jong away." IKR My heart breaks for Jonghyun-muse. Wah, I'm glad I included that flashback now. I'm always like "eehh" about exposing too much backstory, but idk why - it is pretty important. XD

"you douchey douche" made me lol.

"dsifjsiodgjfdoigj Less than 10 parts before we surpass OWs chapter count. fghfgjfnf But all good sequels are longer~~~" <-- NOW I'LL BE UPSET IF THIS ISNT AS LONG

and also "I love all the like, hazy-ness of this." <-- gooooodddd whenever I write in "odd" ways like that, I worry that people are gonna be like "you stupid dork"

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Re: Part 2.... lefty_215 May 1 2011, 00:30:26 UTC
I'M GLAD YOU DID. It's one of my fav side plots, or whatever you wanna call it, of the whole story. It's just sooo interesting to me. *wants to get all up in Jong's head about this stuff*

LAWWWWWWWWWWL I would have smacked him up side the head if I could. I kinda love hating him in moments like this. XDDDDDDDDDD

LOLOLOLOLOL SHUUUUSH. There's so much story left though~~~~~~

Nope, It was one of my fav things about the chapter, actually. LOLOL

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