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strongbabypanda April 23 2011, 07:34:10 UTC
lefty_215 April 23 2011, 23:01:51 UTC
Key's eyes grew teary as he looked into the small mirror that Onew held over his face. The jagged, unattractive scratch near his eye still hurt, and he knew what it meant.

SUCK IT, KEY. I mean....

Onew using the mirror like that... dfjlzdgkdgkgj HELLO.

"He's so fucking naive it's sickening."

"Tell me about it." Onew said

LAWWWWWWWWWWL And them like agreeing something LOLOLOL IDEK.

then Key looked amused, "I guess it doesn't run in the blood."

Onew reached down, and twisted the glass shard in Key's chest. But he agreed, saying, "Guess not." before he jerked the piece out of Key, causing him to gasp in pain. dklfjldkgklgklfg LAWWWWWWWWWWWL and Taemin's dad being a bamf hunter. jdfhkdjghskdg How much does Mom know and is this why she's a fail drunk parent. And trained some hunters? djhdlgkjdfjdkg ( ... )

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Part 2.... lefty_215 April 23 2011, 23:02:44 UTC
My first read through I was too brain dead with excite reading to really think on who you used, but second time I figured 'Thickbrows' was Siwon and once 'Ponytail' started talking I was like, gotta be Heechul. LOLOL

and he started to close the door, but the taller of the two held it.

Yeah.. Minho, that NEVER works. LOLOLOLOL

"You're Choi Minho, aren't you?" The man with the ponytail asked, turning back to face him. "... No." was Minho's reply, as he glanced between the two.

LAWWWWWWWWWWWL MINHO. BEST RESPONSE. WINNER YOU ARE. 'Yeah, he went out.. want an address?'

The man with the ponytail laughed, a harsh and loud laugh, and he slapped Minho hard on the shoulder. "That's a good one. He's funny."

This is when I knew it had to be Heechul. HEECHUL, YOU SO CRAZY AND MAKING ME LAUGH AND CREEPING MOW OUT AT THE SAME TIME.

Ponytail looked to Thickbrows, who busied himself closing the door, instead of joining Ponytail in his amusement.

LOLOLOL Siwon. I see.. Maybe not into Heechul's crazy?

Minho looked between them again, ( ... )

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shana31 April 23 2011, 08:14:26 UTC
YES I KNOW WHO YOU MEANT BY THICKBROWS AND PONYTAIL!!
My god!! to think that you sneak Heenim and Siwon in.... heartattack!!

*too much spazzing over Heenim, so totally forgot that Minho is yet, in trouble again*

Man.... this is what I was afraid of. Onew should've followed Minho around like a stalker. Now look what happen.... *sighs*

Thank you for updating ^_^ b

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mikaerayohiko April 23 2011, 08:28:32 UTC
Oh shshdsahdkashd D; no no no!

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gigiettu April 23 2011, 08:34:41 UTC
UOFUOERIERI SIWON IN STORY AHHHHHH

umm anyway....OMG BOND BROKEN WHAT WILL HAPPEN WHAT WILL HAPPPEENNN. I don't get how Onew let him go I mean seriously as Minho pointed out in the last chap he gets into trouble with or without Onew but I rather get into trouble when the strong vampire is there why thank you

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kiwiniki_jas April 23 2011, 10:47:53 UTC
You are a genius. I should just give you my soul because this awesome. I couldnt help but stare at my screen with an open mouth while reading Key and Onew's 'oh so casual' conversation while Onew was stabbing Key with parts of the mirror. XD And Minho~ i loled when i read Thick Eyebrows and Ponytail. haha

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