White Noise - Part 5

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[strongbabypanda]

lefty_215

[lefty_215]

Amazingness all over this part. even after reading multiple times.

defkjdslgjdslgkxflgbdlfbg Key bringing him a random human. poor guy...

and it's heart pumped like music to his ears, and it's scared expression may as well have been a work of art...

THIS. sfdlfdfkhldkjghdgjkjmdbf,dfbgf

And I was just like, dfndfh YAY TOO SEE SOME MOAR BAMF ONEW AGAIN. <3333

When Key pulled the human away I was like, dfjhsdkfjshkdgf oh no he didn't... KEEEEY~

The momentary power high was crushed by panic. It was near the absolute most crushing feeling Onew had ever felt.

ldf,dfhskdfhksdgbkb <---- lots of this in my head this chapter. LOLOLOL

When it's heart stopped pounding, he dropped it, and stared at it in horror, because in that moment it was horrifying. It was the thing that had almost killed Minho.

fjdsklfsldfh All the "it"s here. Another human's life is just 'it'.

"I can end you." Key said, "And your bonded. Like you were never anything."

KEEEEY. WHAT ARE YOU. awesome. that's what.So Key knowing and being in love with Onew's

[_dawnofthedead_]

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[_dawnofthedead_]

THAT IS MY ONLY RESPONSE.

[strongbabypanda]

D: D: D: DID I RUIN EVERYTHING?

[lefty_215]

I know she doesn't hate it. I just want to post this... LOLOL

[kiwiniki_jas]

i...really have nothing to say for once o.o...wait i do!...Key really does have all the fun. :D

*sigh* Are you tired of me yet! XD

[strongbabypanda]

NEVER tired of you. XD Love your comments.

I FEEL LIKE I DID SOMETHING AWFUL IN THIS PART WAEEEE

[kiwiniki_jas]

Yay! Well in that case i will continue my useless rambling lol.

I dont think there was anything wrong about it. Im actually glad you didnt go into detail about Jessica sucking off Minho. Because well..i feel weird reading Het. haha Jessica was definitely in character...and Minho is A GUY...so it isnt weird that he didnt resist much. Plus he never said he was in love with Onew.

So yes this chapter was well written and relatively awesome like the rest. No worries! :D

here have hearts~! ♥ ♥ ♥

[strongbabypanda]

♥ ♥ Omg, I can't tell you how this comment just like.. exploded me with relief. When you're writing an 'Onho' fanfic, it's easy to assume people will get pretty annoyed if/when one or the other 'hooks up' with anyone else. So I'm glad you get itttt. ♥

I JUST HOPE EVERYONE KNOWS, IT'S STILL AN ONHO STORY~~~~. ♥ ♥

Thank you so much. Many hearts for you. ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

[wilmis]

I was only going to comment and say that I love this(which I do sooo much<3), but that last part made me go O.O ....
Where is Onew when you really need him!!!???
XDDD

[strongbabypanda]

XDDDDDDDDDDDD Thanks very much for the comment. Ohmyyyy, I knew this part would be quite racy~~. XD

[wilmis]

It fit with the story and made it more realistic though, so im not complaining. I just had to get over the shock first XDDD

[kimkeysbum]

love this!<3

[strongbabypanda]

love you!!<3