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Open Window (OnHo) - Part 8

Apr 03, 2011 22:53

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lefty_215 April 4 2011, 04:52:56 UTC

So like, I love how this like starts of making Taemin look like the normal one to then going back to being the odd one again. LOLOLOL

Okay, Onew is just... Again just.. Amazing. And Minho seriously cute. IDEK Love Onew not trusting Taemin.

"Will you believe me if I tell you Onew's an actual vampire?"

Taemin nodded, not sure how truthful he was being when he said "mmhmm" once again.

Really really like this.

"Well, he's a.. friendly vampire." Taemin could hear the doubt in Minho's voice when he said that, and the fear as well. He hardly thought he was really dealing with a friendly vampire, as he was pinned to the floor this way, and afterall - he was pretty sure that friendly vampires didn't exist.

dklfsdkgjlfg LOVE IT. WIN.

Taemin could see Onew giving Minho a look out of the corner of his eye, and he whimpered.

"You won't." Minho said, and asked Onew "right?"

LOVE this bit here~~~~

Onew forced a grin at Taemin, showing off his fangs.

YES.

"So." Minho said, grabbing both of their attention. "Taemin.. Onew is.. in ( ... )

strongbabypanda April 4 2011, 04:58:26 UTC

So like, I love how this like starts of making Taemin look like the normal one to then going back to being the odd one again. LOLOLOL

PWAHHH YOU CAUGHT THATTTT MAKES ME SO HAPPYYYYYY. I was thinking "Minho how weird do you feel now that Taemin's like "DNW"?"

oh oh all happy after this epic perfect comment.

strongbabypanda April 4 2011, 05:00:30 UTC

oh, and you're damn right Onew wasn't gonna let him leave. XD fuck thaaat.

lefty_215 April 4 2011, 05:11:10 UTC

WIN. Good. Love me the BAMF vampire Onew that he really is~~~

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ontaejongminkey April 4 2011, 06:40:12 UTC

I read all chapters in one go and guess what?

I FREAKING LOVE IT SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!<3
Everything is just flawless and the pace of the story is good *thumbs up*
MinhOnew is my OTP and Taemin as Minho's weird but cute neighbor is a good addition!

Thanks for being a dear and sharing this!
I can't wait for more from you<3

strongbabypanda April 4 2011, 19:58:24 UTC

♥ ♥ ♥ THAT MEANS SO MUCH TO ME ♥ ♥ ♥

Thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!!! :D I hope you continue to enjoy it. (I worry about where it's going. because I don't know where it's going. *FAIL*)

ex_argh April 4 2011, 09:25:50 UTC

XDDDDD oh I get it now^^; he's drinking from a cup. Awww poor Taemin doesn't get to have fangs in his body lol.

♥ why is Onew so perfect ;__; idk I seriously can't wait to read more of this \^_________^/
really love it^^
♥♥♥

strongbabypanda April 4 2011, 20:02:08 UTC

IKR? I would have enjoyed some sexy OnTae biting. /perverted.

I'm glad you like Oneewwwwww. I'm kind of worried about my characterizations in this, tbh. ♥ You make me more confident. thank you for real.

ex_argh April 4 2011, 22:17:32 UTC

lol XDD definitely :P *perverted too* ^^;;

Yeah I do like Onew he's so ;_; idk cute/interesting in this? XDDDD Well I think its kind of boring how people (I'm guilty too ;_;) tend to write Onew a certain way ;_; so I find it really refreshing when people write him differently :D
♥

strongbabypanda April 4 2011, 22:21:25 UTC

:D I'm like that as well, I like to see characters written differently, but I too am guilty of occasionally writing some "stereotypes".

lubzyou February 17 2012, 12:28:43 UTC

he always did wonder why more people weren't generally willing to offer a vein, so to speak.
ㅎㅎㅎ yeah people why are'nt you more willing to give it a go? ㅎㅎㅎ

"My spit is magic."
Suddenly, Onew's theme song in my head is I Got the Magic in Me (I don't know the artist)

Perfect parts humor and srs vamp bsns