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lefty_215 April 4 2011, 00:32:21 UTC
YES MOAR.

he freaked and quickly kicked his own bloody clothes underneath the bed - then flung himself out the window gracelessly, landing on his previously injured arm.

LAWL WIN. I LOL'd.

"Humans are so nosy." He cringed

IDK, I like this. LOLOL

"But not in front of the humans." Onew said with an obnoxiously bright, fangy grin.

Jonghyun crossed his arms, "So stay in front of the humans then. See how that works out for you."

"Try to follow me, Jonghyun."

LOVE THIS. YES YES.

Off to morrre~

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strongbabypanda April 4 2011, 01:40:21 UTC
I revised this chapter a little. 8D (nowthatmymomlikesit,i'mgonnabesoanalaboutitlololol) I still feel like it's missing something, but of course your comment makes me feel great about it. I love youuu thanks.

Sorry, I know I wrote it myself, but I totally love the imagery of Onew throwing himself out a window. whatcanisay?

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lefty_215 April 4 2011, 01:56:33 UTC
You crack me up~ Too cute~ <3 I kinda know what you mean, but I can't put my finger on it either. But I'm still enjoying it so much. LOLOL

I love it too. It was beautiful~~

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strongbabypanda April 4 2011, 02:00:21 UTC
I wonder if it's just a matter of being in Onew's "POV" without really knowing what exactly is going on... I'm not sure if that's it, it's just a theory. But I wanted to give a hint that there was some srs business going on, while keeping a bit of mystery. NOT SURE IF THAT WORKED LIKE I WANTED TO.. but issokay issokay. It's just a fanfic, I won't over analyze. XD

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ex_argh April 4 2011, 09:11:36 UTC
BEFORE I COMMENT/READ I JUST WANTED TO SAY - HOLY SHIT YOU SURE ARE CHURNING THESE CHAPTERS OUT :D

♥♥♥

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ex_argh April 4 2011, 09:14:24 UTC
oooh intriguing ^^; I can't wait to see what happens next ♥

loving this so far \^_______^/

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