[fic] Theme 022 "Steam Engine", for 100_wangsts {遊☆戯☆王: 'Atemu'/Yuugi; PG-13}

[strawberrykaoru]

Comments

[duelist_gurl163]

*wibbles* I'm not sure if I'm tearing up cause it was sad, or because it was cute and I'm just trying to hold back squees. Might be both. xD

Gahh...I dunno what to say. That was too good. xD So emotional and well-written and descriptive and...GAHH. Plus completely realistic. I would not be surprised at all if similar scenes have actually happened in real life between people. Society's rules suck. =/

Nice period-correct dialogue, by the way! I noticed it seemed a little "stiff" at first until I realized it was meant to be set in the past. It was really an excellent touch.

I WANT A SEQUEL. A HAPPY SEQUEL. No, I'm not demanding at all. v.v

Gonna go read your paper about DNA now...at least it (hopefully) won't make me cry. xD;

[strawberrykaoru]

*grinning* Awesome, I didn't know romance/angst can produce this kind of reaction out of readers, hmm. *ponders*

Thank you for all the postive comments. xDD It's not...TOO good - as always you give me too much credit. ^///^;;
Believe me, when I did the dialogue, I cringed about the thought of us present-day humans speaking with no abbreviations. Terrifying, isn't it? (See, there's an abbreviation! And another! o_o)

Sequel...sequel...sequel... I don't know if it's entirely possible. I will of course look into it, but don't be disappointed if there's no sequel? xDD

Oh no, the DNA paper won't make you cry. *furrows brow* It'd be odd if it did...unless you meant crying tears of boredom. xD

Thank you again! =D

[duelist_gurl163]

Oh it can. But try to use your powers for good, not evil!

Ah, well you deserved them. And yes, I think it's too good. Iunno what it is exactly, just this was exceptionally well-written, and thus deserved the positive comments. v.v ...Life with no abbreviations would suck too. >.>

Uhh...well if you won't write one, I will! (er...with your permission. Making that threat kind of empty I guess. xD;) v.v Although I don't think I'd do it justice.

Nah, it didn't make me cry. But I did enjoy it. *is a nerd* And holy snap that was a lot of references listed at the end. xD

[strawberrykaoru]

...*shifty glances around*

Of course you can write the sequel to it! =D I look forward to how people interpret the endings and whatnot - you have my permission and support~ 8]

We needed 30 references for the entire paper...I got to 24 then gave up. xD;; Haha, I'm glad you enjoyed it~ ^_^

[moon_wing]

*sniffle*

Awww! Angst seems made for these two. Or they were made for angst... Hmmm... Anyway. Yuugi would be the stong one, I think. Atemu's too emotion-driven, especially when his hikari's involved. I could totally see this happening in my head as I read. Beautifully written.

[strawberrykaoru]

Thank you! :D I aim to please, and angst is just so fun to write when it comes to Puzzleshipping. (It's a good thing I locked them in a cage so they won't kill me right now.)
And yaaaaaay for images in your head! Another mission accomplished. 8D ♥

[velutfortuna]

I saw the pairing and leapt over everything else to get here. That said, I was really getting the 18th~19th century vibe even without the benefit of knowing you were writing from a prompt (having hurdled in as I did ;^^). *waves Atemu/Yugi banner*

[strawberrykaoru]

Yay! I'm glad even without my blabbering at the beginning/end readers get what I was trying to get across - that means a lot! Thank you for the comment~ *waves Atemu/Yuugi banner with you too*

[jumblebelle]

That scenario matched them a little too well. XD This was worded wonderfully, I especially liked how the end was written~ <3 Nicely done! ^^

[strawberrykaoru]

It did, didn't it? They're such an angsty fluffy couple when they want to be. xD
I cried while writing the ending. ;_;

Thank you muchly! =)