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duelist_gurl163 May 13 2008, 16:15:55 UTC
*wibbles* I'm not sure if I'm tearing up cause it was sad, or because it was cute and I'm just trying to hold back squees. Might be both. xD

Gahh...I dunno what to say. That was too good. xD So emotional and well-written and descriptive and...GAHH. Plus completely realistic. I would not be surprised at all if similar scenes have actually happened in real life between people. Society's rules suck. =/

Nice period-correct dialogue, by the way! I noticed it seemed a little "stiff" at first until I realized it was meant to be set in the past. It was really an excellent touch.

I WANT A SEQUEL. A HAPPY SEQUEL. No, I'm not demanding at all. v.v

Gonna go read your paper about DNA now...at least it (hopefully) won't make me cry. xD;

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strawberrykaoru May 13 2008, 22:14:35 UTC
*grinning* Awesome, I didn't know romance/angst can produce this kind of reaction out of readers, hmm. *ponders*

Thank you for all the postive comments. xDD It's not...TOO good - as always you give me too much credit. ^///^;;
Believe me, when I did the dialogue, I cringed about the thought of us present-day humans speaking with no abbreviations. Terrifying, isn't it? (See, there's an abbreviation! And another! o_o)

Sequel...sequel...sequel... I don't know if it's entirely possible. I will of course look into it, but don't be disappointed if there's no sequel? xDD

Oh no, the DNA paper won't make you cry. *furrows brow* It'd be odd if it did...unless you meant crying tears of boredom. xD

Thank you again! =D

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duelist_gurl163 May 13 2008, 23:21:55 UTC
Oh it can. But try to use your powers for good, not evil!

Ah, well you deserved them. And yes, I think it's too good. Iunno what it is exactly, just this was exceptionally well-written, and thus deserved the positive comments. v.v ...Life with no abbreviations would suck too. >.>

Uhh...well if you won't write one, I will! (er...with your permission. Making that threat kind of empty I guess. xD;) v.v Although I don't think I'd do it justice.

Nah, it didn't make me cry. But I did enjoy it. *is a nerd* And holy snap that was a lot of references listed at the end. xD

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strawberrykaoru May 13 2008, 23:53:40 UTC
...*shifty glances around*

Of course you can write the sequel to it! =D I look forward to how people interpret the endings and whatnot - you have my permission and support~ 8]

We needed 30 references for the entire paper...I got to 24 then gave up. xD;; Haha, I'm glad you enjoyed it~ ^_^

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duelist_gurl163 May 14 2008, 16:54:36 UTC
Yaye! Cause a very rabid plotbunny attacked me with an idea for it late last night, and I've already begun it. >.>; I'll try to make it worthy. ^^;

...Ahh, I remember you mentioning the 30 resources paper once. Er...did you need to USE the resources in the paper or could you just shill some random websites/book titles? xD

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strawberrykaoru May 14 2008, 18:41:47 UTC
*squees* MOST EXCELLENT. ♥ I look forward to reading it a lot. ^__^

Nooooo, we unfortunately absolutely HAD to use them. We even had to cite them in the paper, so... and the TA specifically warned us they WILL check, so we kinda couldn't, you know, cheat. xDD

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