Poor Malik. D= (I'm assuming Malik = good guy and Marik = the crazy other personality. I usually use the names the other way around so I wanted to clarify
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Yes, Malik = good guy and Marik = bad guy. XD; Iunno, I've always written them this way...maybe it's the subbed episodes. xD
SCOOOREEEEEE! *beams* I'm so glad you said that--I was aiming for more of a... Hmm, tell-the-story-through-emotions-rather-than-dialogue kind of thing, because I need to work on my descriptions' fluency. v_v
Thank youuuuuu! Your review/comment makes me a very, very happy girl. =DD
I did? Well, CRAP, I thought I deleted it already. *scuttles off to do this* ...evidently posting a fic when I'm only five minutes away from class starting was a bad idea. u_u
What an interesting little piece you have here! I don't read many Malik/Marik fics, seeing as how I'm so stubbornly focused on Yuugi/Atemu, but I have read some and let me tell you that I think you have them very much in character. I know Marik's usually interpreted as being that kind of loud, laughing, crazy insane, but I never liked that portrayal. Your Marik, you can sense the power, the quiet madness that lurks behind words that, uttered by just about anyone else in any other situation, would not be threatening, at least not on the level they are here. I love his dialog
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I'm mainly a Puzzleshipping at heart too, but sometimes I'm tempted to experiment with other pairings' dynamics. Yay! ^_^ It's good to hear I managed to keep them IC, considering that I spent some time rewatching the final episode of Battle City to see them interact some more, haha. It's kind of hard to write a loud, laughing, crazy, and insane Marik when I'm not psychotic enough. v_v
Hmm, you're right. Actually, there were some last minute additions and edittings before I posted and the 'so's' in the pillow line were one of those. Teaches me to not add more than necessary, huh? XD
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SCOOOREEEEEE! *beams* I'm so glad you said that--I was aiming for more of a... Hmm, tell-the-story-through-emotions-rather-than-dialogue kind of thing, because I need to work on my descriptions' fluency. v_v
Thank youuuuuu! Your review/comment makes me a very, very happy girl. =DD
I did? Well, CRAP, I thought I deleted it already. *scuttles off to do this* ...evidently posting a fic when I'm only five minutes away from class starting was a bad idea. u_u
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Yay! ^_^ It's good to hear I managed to keep them IC, considering that I spent some time rewatching the final episode of Battle City to see them interact some more, haha. It's kind of hard to write a loud, laughing, crazy, and insane Marik when I'm not psychotic enough. v_v
Hmm, you're right. Actually, there were some last minute additions and edittings before I posted and the 'so's' in the pillow line were one of those. Teaches me to not add more than necessary, huh? XD
Nu-uh, thank you for reviewing! =D
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