Poor Malik. D= (I'm assuming Malik = good guy and Marik = the crazy other personality. I usually use the names the other way around so I wanted to clarify. ^^;)
Anyway...Whoa. O.o That's mind-blowingly good. Very descriptive, very dark, very humanly-scary, (you know, cause there's horror-scary which is unrealistic and mostly scary just because it overloads the brain with stimuli, and then there's quiet, calm-scary...which is so much more human and realistic. And actually scarier. >.>) I liked it a lot! I never considered that possibly Marik would be re-created, though if you really think about it, it makes sense that somehow he could be. I like that idea! Very creative. ^^
Having never really read other Malik/Marik-based stories I can't really compare this to anything, but just as a story in general, I really liked it. It's just...I dunno, it's got something that makes it believable. Like this could happen not only in the Yugioh world, but to someone in the real world too. And I think that makes it really good.
Edit: I think you accidentally posted this fic on your journal twice...? Or is that intentional? O.o
Yes, Malik = good guy and Marik = bad guy. XD; Iunno, I've always written them this way...maybe it's the subbed episodes. xD
SCOOOREEEEEE! *beams* I'm so glad you said that--I was aiming for more of a... Hmm, tell-the-story-through-emotions-rather-than-dialogue kind of thing, because I need to work on my descriptions' fluency. v_v
Thank youuuuuu! Your review/comment makes me a very, very happy girl. =DD
I did? Well, CRAP, I thought I deleted it already. *scuttles off to do this* ...evidently posting a fic when I'm only five minutes away from class starting was a bad idea. u_u
Anyway...Whoa. O.o That's mind-blowingly good. Very descriptive, very dark, very humanly-scary, (you know, cause there's horror-scary which is unrealistic and mostly scary just because it overloads the brain with stimuli, and then there's quiet, calm-scary...which is so much more human and realistic. And actually scarier. >.>) I liked it a lot! I never considered that possibly Marik would be re-created, though if you really think about it, it makes sense that somehow he could be. I like that idea! Very creative. ^^
Having never really read other Malik/Marik-based stories I can't really compare this to anything, but just as a story in general, I really liked it. It's just...I dunno, it's got something that makes it believable. Like this could happen not only in the Yugioh world, but to someone in the real world too. And I think that makes it really good.
Edit: I think you accidentally posted this fic on your journal twice...? Or is that intentional? O.o
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SCOOOREEEEEE! *beams* I'm so glad you said that--I was aiming for more of a... Hmm, tell-the-story-through-emotions-rather-than-dialogue kind of thing, because I need to work on my descriptions' fluency. v_v
Thank youuuuuu! Your review/comment makes me a very, very happy girl. =DD
I did? Well, CRAP, I thought I deleted it already. *scuttles off to do this* ...evidently posting a fic when I'm only five minutes away from class starting was a bad idea. u_u
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