Comments | stoptouchingme: its been a while

stoptouchingme

its been a while

Dec 19, 2005 01:15

and this is a bad thing to break back onto the lj scene with i suppose, but this is a short spot of fiction that i might put into a larger, but still short story. comments would be lovely ( Read more... )

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sarah_es December 19 2005, 07:30:25 UTC

why do you live in a fridge?
are you a leftover?

stoptouchingme December 19 2005, 15:44:08 UTC

yeah, thats from an earlier part. itll be explained later.

sarah_es December 20 2005, 02:08:47 UTC

i feel that you must know, and probably already do know, that i didn't read past that line about the fridge. surface details are all i'm really into.

stoptouchingme December 20 2005, 02:58:11 UTC

well, you probably wouldnt have enjoyed the rest of it anyway.

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awmills December 19 2005, 20:56:34 UTC

do it zach

bring it on

give me more

PLEASE!!!

stoptouchingme December 19 2005, 21:41:19 UTC

ok. i will, just for you.

bored...maybe to much thought. concretebirds December 19 2005, 20:58:24 UTC

strange and intriguing. a thought. do you or the person whose perspective this story is being told believe himelf to be solid, and unchanging, and "important" (although that is not the word i want to use, its not the right word but its rightish.) most people have dreams of falling toward the thing they feel as solid and unchanging. a city street. off a mountain. into the ocean. all these things are so large or "important." (why can't i figure out what word i need for this) fear of being small and constantly having to adapt to a large and strange uncontrollable force. "your" dream is backwards. you see yourself as constant and unchanging. fear that something small and insignificant that "just is" will destroy you in your constant universe. (you know the chandelier is gonna be there, you don't move your bed, yet you fear it falling) a fear of the change or adaptation itself...not of the unknown. or maybe...ya i will stop.

Re: bored...maybe to much thought. stoptouchingme December 19 2005, 21:41:04 UTC

hmm. that is a lot of thought, but still appreciated.

Re: bored...maybe to much thought. dbittey December 25 2005, 03:30:22 UTC

i think she's right actually...
in an incredibly freaky way...

Re: bored...maybe to much thought. stoptouchingme December 25 2005, 17:34:59 UTC

hahaha.

arlingtonroad December 20 2005, 21:14:41 UTC

this is cool. i like it. you should check out www.slowlydownward.com, its amazing.

harvardsummer December 27 2005, 04:55:56 UTC

included to my short list of rarely updated lj friends whose journals I read, maybe one day I will update my own

harvardsummer December 27 2005, 04:56:24 UTC

oh this is stephen