Steve/Danny, slash/angst; Torn Away, part 1 of 4

[4thoffive]

Title: Torn Away, part 1 of 3
Pairings: Steve/Danny
Genre: Slash/angst
Rating: NC-17
Warnings/Spoilers: None
Summary: Danny, Steve and the team investigate the kidnapping of a small child
Word Count: 4,099 (part 1)
Author's note: I’ve always wanted to write a full mystery from beginning to end so here goes. I hope it’s not boring and I really hope you don

Comments

[4thoffive]

Hi,
I'm told I should have used the term "Girl Scout Troop" instead of Girl Guide Group.

[ellie_pierson]

It's your story and you can call it whatever you want. :) I still knew what you meant.

Wonderful beginning, I can't wait for the next part.

[4thoffive]

Oh thank you. The story is not getting many reviews which makes me worry that people aren't enjoying it but I'm glad that you are.

[bandbfan]

There is such thing as Girl Guides and just like above... this is your story, your words!
Just b/c there are not many comments/reviews doesn't mean the readers aren't there. I can be an awful lurker sometimes, sorry! I have just read through all the stories posted from In The Shadow Of The Fire to this one and may I say that I have not stopped sniffling since and you are one hell of a writer!!
Off to read more :DDDDDD

[sgflutegirl]

I really like this so far. Can't wait for more.

[4thoffive]

Thank you very much!

[sherry57]

A good team story and investigation! Great first chapter....looking forward to more!

[4thoffive]

Thank you I hope you enjoy the upcoming parts as well.

[noctuabunda]

Intriguing!
Waiting for more. :)

[4thoffive]

Thank you for reading.

[les342]

I missed this when you first posted it a couple of days ago, but I just read it and am intrigued. And I have no idea where you're going with it, so it's definitely a mystery, at least for me. I don't have time to read the second part right now, but plan to do so ASAP.