Steve/Danny, slash/angst; Torn Away, part 1 of 4

Oct 05, 2011 19:50

Title: Torn Away, part 1 of 3
Pairings: Steve/Danny
Genre: Slash/angst
Rating: NC-17
Warnings/Spoilers: None
Summary: Danny, Steve and the team investigate the kidnapping of a small child
Word Count: 4,099 (part 1)
Author's note: I’ve always wanted to write a full mystery from beginning to end so here goes. I hope it’s not boring and I really hope you don ( Read more... )

author: 4thoffive, fiction: slash, rating: nc-17, fic: steve/danny, fic genre: established relationship

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4thoffive October 6 2011, 03:30:11 UTC
Hi,
I'm told I should have used the term "Girl Scout Troop" instead of Girl Guide Group.

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ellie_pierson October 6 2011, 06:07:40 UTC
It's your story and you can call it whatever you want. :) I still knew what you meant.

Wonderful beginning, I can't wait for the next part.

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4thoffive October 7 2011, 04:11:26 UTC
Oh thank you. The story is not getting many reviews which makes me worry that people aren't enjoying it but I'm glad that you are.

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bandbfan October 15 2011, 01:34:13 UTC
There is such thing as Girl Guides and just like above... this is your story, your words!
Just b/c there are not many comments/reviews doesn't mean the readers aren't there. I can be an awful lurker sometimes, sorry! I have just read through all the stories posted from In The Shadow Of The Fire to this one and may I say that I have not stopped sniffling since and you are one hell of a writer!!
Off to read more :DDDDDD

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4thoffive October 15 2011, 03:37:04 UTC
Oh my god I may be in love with you. Thank you for that wonderful comment. Brought tears to my eyes. I'm so glad you're enjoying my stories. I'm sure you're right that there are people reading and not commenting. I lurked for a year before I started posting.

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