"la joie de la vie" -- Doctor Who -- NC-17 -- spoilerfic!

May 05, 2006 01:01

spoilers for series 2, episode four.

la joie de la vie
by Steve and Dave

Knight takes queen. )

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kbk May 5 2006, 06:32:23 UTC
Ow. Ow. Hell, you people. You hurt me with your wowness. This is fantastic.

Typos:
seems scream a sound like crackling static electricity - seams?
Rose and Mickey are shopping, and he return before - will return? does return?
explore the tors and dales of her rip cage - rib cage

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thedorkygirl May 5 2006, 06:38:06 UTC
Awww. Thanks.

omgguesswhatthosewereALLmine!

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kbk May 5 2006, 08:24:02 UTC
Heh. Was this too? at a war about which she knows knowing.

Steve says the numbering was your idea, and I say it is fab and clever. And I just read in alphabetical order and it is still good but not as good because of the POV, of course. Is goooood.

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nostalgia_lj May 5 2006, 08:25:20 UTC
There should be a remix from her PoV. In her sequence. DAVE MAKE IT SO.

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melata_fic May 5 2006, 06:38:51 UTC
...

You have turned PWP inside out and made me love it. Maybe it's just the paradoxes and the chess, but... guh. And there /are/ mentions of how he is alien, and that makes all the difference.

If the story behind the oh-so-very-hot porn is Jossed, I shall be most upset.

I have decided it's the writing and the story that makes me like it, and makes me not collapse into giggles at "Take me, Time Lord."

In short, you two are evil and brilliant and I love this.

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thedorkygirl May 5 2006, 06:44:12 UTC
TAKE ME TIME LORD!

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melata_fic May 5 2006, 08:45:13 UTC
:D It should be in every shipperfic ever.

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thedorkygirl May 6 2006, 04:18:40 UTC
Sad bit is that this is not shipperfic because she is not conventional. It makes me cry. She should replace Rose! She did not die at forty-three, no. She just went off in time!

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nostalgia_lj May 5 2006, 08:46:11 UTC
Rar!

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thedorkygirl May 6 2006, 04:18:05 UTC
*snorfle* ICON!

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taraljc May 5 2006, 06:57:13 UTC
omg *WORSHIPS*

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nostalgia_lj May 5 2006, 08:46:18 UTC
*eats u*

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taraljc May 5 2006, 17:30:38 UTC
*omg is etted*

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thedorkygirl May 6 2006, 04:17:50 UTC
*snacks on your leftover bits*

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rhipowered May 5 2006, 07:09:52 UTC
Is good and well-writtens but also teh depressing. The loops in time! The living and the getting old and the...yeah.

Because sometimes he is a selfish bastard who should not be allowed to play with other people's lives.
Yeah.

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nostalgia_lj May 5 2006, 08:46:54 UTC
also, PORN!

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