Ow. Ow. Hell, you people. You hurt me with your wowness. This is fantastic.
Typos: seems scream a sound like crackling static electricity - seams? Rose and Mickey are shopping, and he return before - will return? does return? explore the tors and dales of her rip cage - rib cage
Heh. Was this too? at a war about which she knows knowing.
Steve says the numbering was your idea, and I say it is fab and clever. And I just read in alphabetical order and it is still good but not as good because of the POV, of course. Is goooood.
zxomg, wtf, how many times did we go, "how can we write the SEX and not make it boring?" must we also go, "how do we REWRITE the sex and not make it boring?"
we could make one where she doesn't die but instead goes off in time with the doctor.
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seems scream a sound like crackling static electricity - seams?
Rose and Mickey are shopping, and he return before - will return? does return?
explore the tors and dales of her rip cage - rib cage
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omgguesswhatthosewereALLmine!
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Steve says the numbering was your idea, and I say it is fab and clever. And I just read in alphabetical order and it is still good but not as good because of the POV, of course. Is goooood.
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we could make one where she doesn't die but instead goes off in time with the doctor.
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it is gone
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