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The Trouble with Barney (6/9)

May 10, 2009 02:07

Title: The Trouble with Barney
Author: Stablergirl
Rating: MA
Author's Notes: Ok this heats up a little here, so just stand warned. Hopefully it's not so awful that you can't stand it...
Disclaimer: Still don't belong to me.

( Chapter 6: If you need a volunteer to fill in your gap, I'm willing and able any day of the week. )

barney/robin, himym fanfiction, brotp

Comments 28

idioticonion May 10 2009, 06:27:18 UTC

And she NAILS it... Wonderful chapter, just angsty and hot and so, so meaningful.

I almost long for a Barney POV or another character talking to him. Because I want to know what he's thinking!

And I want to tell Robin to get her head out of her ass.

stablergirl May 10 2009, 13:40:43 UTC

Wow do you read my mind or what? Yeah I've been thinking of tossing this to someone else for a chapter just so we can get an idea what's going on in Barney's head...

I'd like to tell Robin that, too. Luckily that's what Lily is for ;-)

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stablergirl May 10 2009, 13:41:45 UTC

I know, kind of too fast probably, but oh well! Next chapter soon I think. and yeah it's TOTALLY HIMYM angst style. Glad you like it cause otherwise I think it's probably just weird. ;-)

tempestdance May 10 2009, 06:54:15 UTC

1. HOT.
2. So sweet!
3. ANGST. Awesome angst.
4. Love it!
5. So... where's the next one? :D

stablergirl May 10 2009, 13:43:07 UTC

1. RIGHT? These two make me need an ice bath...
2. I know. Barney when he means it, killer.
3. I'm an angst-a-holic, so that explains that ;-)
4. Thank you!!
5. Oh...it's on its way...

solojones May 10 2009, 08:27:46 UTC

I love how this managed to be hot without being sleezy. That 'argument' they had, back and forth just telling each other to stop... brilliant and tantalizing. This all happened so perfectly.

But now... oh poor Barney. This will not go well.

stablergirl May 10 2009, 13:43:44 UTC

lol well...it might go well? Yeah you're probably right, poor Barney indeed.
At least, knowing me, it will end happily eventually.

roland44 May 10 2009, 09:27:18 UTC

“Seriously,” he mumbles, “wake up, Robin,”
OH TEDDY! *wants to make sweet love to Ted* (ahem ahem)

...the last time Lily was there to identify it for her right before she’d gone crazy and followed a phantom Ted Mosby around town, only to feel like a total jackass when it turned out to be Barney.
I love the reference to Ted Mosby, architect!

“I’ve been meaning to introduce you to, uh, to…” he grabs the shoulder of someone who’s just walking in and whips the guy around to face them, “this guy.”
Cut me up into a million pieces. With a very blunt knife.

Jealousy rears it's ugly head..
Hehe yeah it does, just like in the fifth act of Aunt Lily's play ;)

He pushes into her and she kisses him and this wasn’t ever what she was expecting because life isn’t supposed to happen like this, all unplanned and unpredictable and Armani-clad and confusing.
*swoons*

..and she hopes and prays nobody can tell that it feels like he said jump and she did, from ten thousand fucking feet. WOAH BABE NICE CALLBACK TO YOUR OWN FIC ( ... )

roland44 May 10 2009, 09:29:41 UTC

Oh, and, TOTALLY MEMMING. This is one of my fav multi-part fics EVER! =D

stablergirl May 10 2009, 13:45:42 UTC

Lol thanks for the quotes! I love it when ppl tell me exactly what they liked and didn't like, so this comment gets two thumbs up from me.

Yeah I left the abstract smex abstract so that you can decide. Metaphor? Not a metaphor? Did he literally drop to his knees?

...I think he did, but you can pick whatever you want. That's the beauty of abstract!

roland44 May 10 2009, 13:54:00 UTC

Now it's going to torture me forever as to what exactly happened. Thanks. Really. I'm just going to go crazy now. :P

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