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[danniisupernova]

Title: rattlesnake with hands
Fandom: Heroes
Rating: R
P/C: Adam/Elle, mentions of Peter/Elle, Bob
Warnings: Mentions of underage intercourse
Summary: “And what would make it a date?”

Elle takes a step back. “Doing something new.”

“So by that reasoning, we’ve been on two dates.”

Comments

[tju_tju_tju_tju]

Freaking awesome, man. This was absolutely fantastic. I like the idea of Elle taking her cues from Sex and the City... seems very in-character for her. I really enjoyed this a lot. Awesome job! \o/

[danniisupernova]

Ooooh thank you! I love the idea of Elle having to build a "life" from all these things she's never really experienced or seen.

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[witisoverrated]

Frak, that was fantastic. When I use Battlestar Galactica lingo, you know you've got yourself a good fic :) Amazing really, I love reading Elle's sadistic little princess act, you bring it out wonderfully and Adam is just priceless and perfectly english as always. Hope Kring brings him back volume 3 *crosses fingers for Elle/Adam*

[danniisupernova]

Lol well I'm glad I merited the BSG f-bomb.

I was wondering if she was coming off as "Elle" so much. I wanted to have them be in character but at the same time be sort of vulnerable and actually feeling (without the cheesy/corny aspect). Lol, well for some reason to me Elle/Adam just clicks even though the have minimal canon.

[witisoverrated]

I'm not too sure either of them are actually capable of feeling, but whatever little emotion they actually can, you brought it out :). A 400 year old man and a manic sociopath that's never experienced life, they balance out quite nicely, no?

[danniisupernova]

I think they can (further more I actually know a faux-sociopath and can draw to many parrallels between them and Elle to believe that she is actually a sociopath) feel quite a lot. They just REALLY don't want to.

[danniisupernova]

OMG *facepalm*!

I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. And reccing? For ME?! *flails!*

Thank you so so much!

[freckles929]

This was really good. It was interesting to see the different sides of Elle, and how she learned things through TV and stuff. And I love reading fic with Adam.

[danniisupernova]

Lol well thank you! I felt I left Adam a little bit underdeveloped in this, but it's good to know that his fans are satisfied.

[ivy_b]

I just adore Elle and Adam together- they're so crazy, they might as well be crazy together! And he could always heal, so she doesn't have to worry about hurting him. Good fic, you've really captured the complexity of Elle being a girl/woman, nicely done.

[danniisupernova]

Lol, Adam/Elle = crazy in love :)

Thanks so much for reading and commenting!