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[danniisupernova]

Title: rattlesnake with hands
Fandom: Heroes
Rating: R
P/C: Adam/Elle, mentions of Peter/Elle, Bob
Warnings: Mentions of underage intercourse
Summary: “And what would make it a date?”

Elle takes a step back. “Doing something new.”

“So by that reasoning, we’ve been on two dates.”

Comments

[witisoverrated]

Frak, that was fantastic. When I use Battlestar Galactica lingo, you know you've got yourself a good fic :) Amazing really, I love reading Elle's sadistic little princess act, you bring it out wonderfully and Adam is just priceless and perfectly english as always. Hope Kring brings him back volume 3 *crosses fingers for Elle/Adam*

[danniisupernova]

Lol well I'm glad I merited the BSG f-bomb.

I was wondering if she was coming off as "Elle" so much. I wanted to have them be in character but at the same time be sort of vulnerable and actually feeling (without the cheesy/corny aspect). Lol, well for some reason to me Elle/Adam just clicks even though the have minimal canon.

[witisoverrated]

I'm not too sure either of them are actually capable of feeling, but whatever little emotion they actually can, you brought it out :). A 400 year old man and a manic sociopath that's never experienced life, they balance out quite nicely, no?

[danniisupernova]

I think they can (further more I actually know a faux-sociopath and can draw to many parrallels between them and Elle to believe that she is actually a sociopath) feel quite a lot. They just REALLY don't want to.

[witisoverrated]

Huh? Well, you've got me baffled, I'm not much of an expert but it sounds interesting enough to touch on. Either way, it's still a beautiful piece of fiction.