Final Fantasy VII (Zack/Cloud)

Apr 23, 2007 01:22

It was quiet, afterwards.

Cloud shifted languidly, the sheets blessedly cool against oversensitive skin. Hot, wide hands rubbed soothing circles across his hipbones, stirring the dull fire blanketing his limbs into a slow, unhurried burn. A wordless murmur rumbled through the dark as his lover shifted closer, pressing against his back in a hot, ( Read more... )

final fantasy vii, cleflink

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icedark_elf April 23 2007, 05:29:26 UTC
Pretty.

Shameless Zack. Go for it, man.

Not sure what you were going for, but this is nice.

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cleflink April 23 2007, 05:55:21 UTC
*grin* All Zacks should be shameless. It's so much more fun.

I've been wrestling with this fic for ages to try and give it a kind of languid feel - I'm not sure I managed it, but it's certainly heartening to hear you liked it anyway.

Thanks so much! :)

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l6vil6rr April 23 2007, 09:56:45 UTC
Very nice, I really liked that Cloud wasn't hiding behind a wall of insecurities for once.

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cleflink April 23 2007, 14:36:05 UTC
*grin* Thanks! It was neat for me to write the strength that's inside pre-game Cloud, rather than the hesitation he always shows the world.

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strawberry_smut April 24 2007, 00:12:15 UTC
I love the slow, warm, sexy feel to this fic.
Awesome ambience, great story.

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cleflink April 24 2007, 13:34:36 UTC
^___^ Thank you so much! I love giving these two the chance to interact with each other - they're just so cute :)

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sister_coyote April 27 2007, 07:29:37 UTC
mmm. I like the atmosphere here, the langour -- very nice indeed.

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cleflink April 28 2007, 01:55:26 UTC
^___^ That makes me very happy indeed. I just adore these two :)

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fyr3_ph03nix November 13 2007, 09:53:53 UTC
Mm, I'm on a roll here, aren't I? Teehee. Well, I like the smoothness of this drabble. It's very. . . relaxing? I don't know what word I'm looking for, lol. But, erm, yeah. o__0

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cleflink November 13 2007, 15:47:24 UTC
*grin* Believe me, I'm enjoying your roll - absolutely wonderful way to start my day! :)

This one was fussy to work with - I was aiming for something kind of languid and heavy and, while I'm still not sure it's as good as it could be, I'm certainly glad you enjoyed.

Thanks!

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