FF7/Sailor Moon (Sephiroth/Sailor Saturn)

[belladonna12]

Title:  Untitled for now
Author: belladonna12
Rating:  pg13
Word count:  337
Summary:  Summoning spells and senshi are always strange.
A/N:   Just, don’t ask, you don’t wanna know where I got this idea from…  the Japanese in this is stolen partly from one of the Sailor Moon songs, Ai no Senshi though I’ve changed a word or two to try to make it more

Comments

[midnight_fae24]

Hi from a recent Saturn/Sephiroth convert! I didn't think this was bad at all. It's rather short and not necessarily inconclusive, but...it leaves more to be desired. I think you could have stronger relayed the feeling of power that Sephiroth obtains when he summons Saturn. The scene seems more to me that he's observing what true power is more so than feeling it. I would have liked to see more of a reaction from Sephiroth; is he surprised by the appearance of Saturn--is she what he was expecting, is he in awe of her power, or is he disappointed that instead of a beast of mythic proportions he summons what appears to be a mere girl dressed in a sailor suit, etc. You have a great knack for description. You paint a vivid picture of Saturn without getting caught up in minor details. This scene has me very intrigued. I hope you plan to add to this or extend it into a full fanfic.