[July 27] The Matrix: Persephone/Trinity

[beckyh2112]

Title: Thunder Then Lightning
Author: beckyh2112
Rating: G
Word Count: 178
Prompt: Forced desire - "it's all causality"
Author's Notes: I have an inherent need to make most of my Matrix fics very odd. Also, my brain took maybe one word out of the prompt and ignored the rest. >_>

Comments

[incandescens]

Vivid and fascinating. Neat!

[monitorscreen]

Very interesting. I like this idea. And the last line delivers the forlorn feeling well. Nice piece :-)