Final Fantasy X (Yuna)

[syvia]

Title: Indulgence
Author/Artist: syvia
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: graphic description of bodily functions
Word Count: 1650
Summary: Sex is a mental thing- especially when you’re alone. Yuna indulges in her own pleasure for once, but just because this is a natural thing doesn't make it easy.
Prompt: 19. Final Fantasy X, Yuna: Masturbation - ”She refused to

Comments

[jurhael]

I liked! Thanks!

[syvia]

*tips hat* ^^ Thanks.

*curiously* So how're you fics coming along? :3

[jurhael]

I had a couple done, but with the 1st and the 5th, I'm having a little trouble with, but both should be up today! Better late than never. A final one is coming up, but that's in the last week of July, so even if I'm late, I should have everything done.

[syvia]

^^ Good luck~.

[rosehiptea]

Very sexy. I enjoyed the detailed description and her thoughts about Tidus.

[syvia]

*grins* I worried that I'd been too practical "should have cut my nails", so I appreciate hearing that.

^^ Thank you!

[emerald_embers]

(S'up honey?)

I definitely liked this one because it feels so very natural - the being embarassed and "Hm, this isn't that goo- oh, wait, *that* bit's good, mm", and the "don't think about __", because goodness knows the mind likes to go off wandering at the worst of times, and yay.

Very very good ^_^. Also loved the practical if really kind of sad thought of not wanting to have sex because of the possibly killing an unborn child thing, oh lord. So sad and aww.

Liked it :). *hugs*

[syvia]

(Y halo thar! ^^)

*smiles* I was very tired of the 'virgin who gets everything right and has an orgasm the first time' fics. I felt they painted an inaccurate picture. ;p

Oh yes- very difficult to keep your focus on a task that one is unfamiliar with. Studying, work, sports- it's hard to keep one's eye on the ball if this is the first time you've SEEN the ball.

*pets Yuna* Yeah. :/ Poor kid. (I wonder if Seymour would have wanted a wedding night. *shudders*)

*huggles back* Thank you, hon~!

[mad_rex]

Yes. Oh, I am embarrassed by how much I liked this. ^o^;

This was a joy to read for so many reasons. I loved your take on the prompt, first off. The way you made Yuna almost fear exploring herself, then take charge and grapple with that fear head-on was wonderful. And yes, her fumbling attempt at the act was a refreshing change from similar fics I've seen, with their all-too-experienced protagonists.

All the details were really good, too. Despite showing things from a perspective I obviously have little experience with, you made that perspective relatable, and made very clear all the things Yuna was doing and feeling. Her brief fantasy of Tidus--which was just the right amount of brief, by the way--gave us some excellent images. And the background bits, like Yuna asking Lulu about sex and then running away screaming, were also a nice touch

[syvia]

^^ The short version (because I just got back from seeing Harry Potter and for some reason I'm a lot more exhausted than I should be);

This review was awesome, and I thank you very much for it!

Yes, I do have a writing journal, but it's not the only place (or even the most consistant place) I leave my fics. It is vast_worlds and I really should put a list of my SK fics.

*chuckling* I never turn away a buddy, and I've just friended you.

G'night, and you'll eventually see a more detailed reply!

[mad_rex]

Thank you! *Friends back, and Friends vast_worlds as well*

(I'm having to wait until Saturday to see OotP, myself. I...I fear for how some of the scenes are going to translate....)

[lostangelssong]

I liked this. I liked the idea when you first mentioned it to me, and I like it more now that I've read it. The idea of Yuna trying to figure out what to do is was realistic, I thought.