Final Fantasy VII (Zack/Cloud)

[queenoftheskies]

Title: Time Off for Good Behavior
Author/Artist: queenoftheskies
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: M/M kissing, flirting
Word count: 1,053
Summary: Zack takes the new recruit under his wing when a group of seasoned SOLDIERS want to have a little fun with him.
Prompt: #18. Final Fantasy VII, Zack/Cloud: Public displays of affection - 'what is with you and molesting me in

Comments

[ladyofshadow]

*grin* Good ole Zack, always willing to 'help' a buddy in need. I do like his tactics. ^__~!

The description and dialogue of the seasoned SOLDIERs was also well done. They made me cringe! lol

I also like the placement of quote from the prompt.

[queenoftheskies]

Thank you. :)

Zack was fun to write.

[cleflink]

Hee that was so cute. It's neat to see Cloud so 'green' and not knowing exactly why he's being tormented. And the commander at the beginning was awesome (he makes it sounds like they're on a school field trip, not enjoying some off time from the army).

The part at the end made me wibble. So perfect.

[queenoftheskies]

Thank you. :)

I enjoyed writing this story.

[strawberry_smut]

The part at the end just made the whole story. :)
Ahh, my daily fluff level has been achieved. Great story.

[queenoftheskies]

Thanks so much!

[galerian_ash]

Oh Zack, always the hero XD

This is awfully sweet (not to mention funny!), and I love the ending.

[queenoftheskies]

Thank you so much. :)