My book: Chronicles of Azion: The Coming

[raven_christina]

I finally decided I'd post some of my book. Mainly just the prologue and chapter one though.

Please comment.

Prologue
          It was a dark, rainy night. Water poured from the gutters into the streets as many ran to find shelter. Beggars slunk into doorways, shielding themselves against the downpour.
          Galen limped towards the doorway on his

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[loverofdragons]

I like it for the most part. Few things to point out (that were things told to me in my college writing courses